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Read MoreHey there, What’s up?I haven’t seen you in a while.Never figured I would run into you here.You look good. Did you lose some weight?Well, that’s great! Did you ever get married to your sweetheart in high school?Oh. Well, that’s...
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Appreciate it Dampkitten. Thanks for the feedback.
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Well…fuck.. this wasn’t what I was expecting. But damn was it good. Talk about a plot twist! You’ve done it again Vision. I like it! xx
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I do enjoy a plot twist from time to time. Thanks P.G for the comments.
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Vivid and sharp. Very creative.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciated!
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What have I just read?! Fight club and Identity had a baby poem.
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YES! Great description here M.E. Thanks for the comments.
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WHAT’S THE FUCKING ISSUE?!?
OK THEN! YOU ASKED FOR IT!!Felt this deep. Very creative, Keith xoxo
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Appreciate it Fia. Thanks! xx
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Thanks!
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Fight Club vibes, Keith. The Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Great write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the comments. Always…
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Read MoreYou glide your thumb across my lips My tongue darts out to taste Both of us aware of our own thirst For the other Leaning in close as if pulled Breathing in each other breaths Time is slow and absurdly fast My head tilts to a...
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You are HOT as shit, just like always… and I’m all about Tequila.
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Hmm Damp Kitten and tequila. Tasty. Thank you ❤️
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Now I am drunk on these lines!
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The lines… or…? lol
Thank you, M.E
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E..ve..ry..th..ing!
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Well, that is tempting. ;))
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Intoxicating write, Fia. The room always gets hot when you spill, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Need some heat over here.;))
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very hot
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Thank you, Ambjr;))
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Read MoreWho would ever dare then thinkabout these revelations in ink,each drop bled out upon the page,but meant for some distant, finer age. Or so it seems within this dream,while I pen away on a poetic stream,scribbling lines through sleepless night,in...
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I like the metaphorical analogy of how life writes on you, and thus you write in transference – a poetic picture of every impact, a future reference for the ages. Deep as always, my dear.
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You have a wild imagination, VOI. I wasn’t expecting a psychotic suicide. But yeah, this is definitely a vision of insanity… true to form!