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Read MoreIt’s just another shitty day in paradise.The sky is a uniform grey,not the ominous kind, but soft and familiar, like my grandmother’s hair. A fine rain drifts down, blown every which way by a world weary wind. Somewhere, birds...
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You and crimsin’s, writes are very powerful tonight. You’re right it is not going to be alright.
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Thanks Crimsin and Fia.
Whilst I think about such things I don’t let it weigh me down or make me angry.To empathize with all who suffer allows me to look out the window with joy….mostly.
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That is good.
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We have a lot to be thankful for, Benny.
I think you’re a hero quietly relaxing in your garden
cape floating around your neck
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As a nurse, you’re the hero.
I’ll settle for being a mote in the eye of whoever created whole shebang.
Thanks for the lovely comment.😘
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Incredible write my friend, phenomenal imagery. Never thought I’d see such sad days. Spot On. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More“Women want a man 6 feet tall, making 6 figures and with 6 acres of landBut I have half of the 18 she can take-baby just make those legs expand, “With this constant dick pussy pushing or in...
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Let me start by saying your rhyme scheme and your level of focus on a topic is amazing. You give me urban poet vibe. Raw and unapologetic. Love it
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I try to always challenge myself harder than before. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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I love that you posted this dear. TY 💖
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You are welcome. 🙂
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beautiful lovely one 💕
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Thank you.
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🙂
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Read MoreOnce Upon a Midnight sky A rendezvous between you and I A secret plan that was never to be told Was let out and all the others now know I wear his mark that he had given me Your eyes show there is no...
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A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)
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Thank you, M.E I love Poe.;))
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a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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There was a wicked man
who had a wicked cock…But I’m a wicked girl
who wants to rock your world-
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You already do.xoxo
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Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶
With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.
Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.
“Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I”Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌-
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Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal
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You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨
We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍
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Read MoreDo you think I can make you wetIf I swirl my fingersinside harder fasterI bet.Do you think I can make you screammy name If my tongue swirls insideand drinksyour cream.Do you think I can make them redeven more with a flick of a tongue or a bite for blood to shed.Do you think I...
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Yes, I think you are right. She’s scared of you. Woo. Nice poem
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yes im scary … that is why you are running too…
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Each line reads like throes of little death. Well penned!
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Thank you for your support… appreciate it
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Mmmm…. Ok I’ll shut up and get to work… can you survive that?
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Powerfully penned, Sam. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend
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I’ve been thinking about you all night.
I’m tired of thinking.
Get busy-
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I was busy… if I tell you you won’t believe me
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Don’t you know that I believe everything you say
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wow dearest Sam this is evocative and dangerous 💕
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evocative ?… yes…. dangerous ??? … no… well, maybe… only for those who moan… but thank you for reading and commenting dear Crimsin
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you made me smile 😊
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hi Benny it appears are minds are on similar wavelengths I don’t like to write about war but the suffering is on my mind like I can feel their pain on my own body…when will people realize this fact? great write 💕