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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Those lines are 100% mine. They are hard to stay away from, that’s it in a nutshell. There are so many great musicians out there, some bands even have followings, though they never got a record deal. It wasn’t wasted music some people loved it, that is making it in a way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m a sucker for awesome lyrics, and these hit like a radioactive hurricane! Heheh
Great tempo with lots of energy!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my lines. lol. It’s nice to see you, hope all is well in your life. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I love this rhythm and flow LOL Don’t turn your back on her indeed.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I think that line was mine, it could have been, Joey’s. The verses are where I’m definite. lol. I was tired of these words sitting on a hard drive, so I did something about it. lol. A wise friend of mine once said “Work is meant to be shared, to be read and heard.” I might have paraphrased a bit. lol. Thank you, Fia. I think your influence has made me see that clearly. Always learning, I am. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well done Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Good to see you, and was also nice to get read some of your work again. Hope all is going well my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“she’s got eyes that mystify
makes you wanna take a chance
she’s the spider, yeah you’re the fly
caught up in a web of circumstance…”I’m totally feeling those lines right there. I will say, I’ve known a few dudes like this…might have dated a couple. This is a killer song, my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Unfortunately, I’m unable to talk about the song for a moment. But it will be resolved. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Incredible work, Fia. You’re one of a kind. :))))))
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Thank you, Tim ;))
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Kee up the good work Fia 💋
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Thank you, Backdeckbenny ;))
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Amazing work, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreOnly in candlelight can I see you. Only then can I lay eyes on your perfect form. Only then can the glinting emeralds in your eyes cast their spell on me. Only by the candle flame can I hear...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic!
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There’s a spiritual side to this I think you caught. Really creative writing here. Nice job!
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Das ist wirklich ein Meisterwerk, Daniel!
Like Tim, I appreciate the spiritual side of your writing. I understand the candlelight as a metaphor for our own inner light. The light in our hearts allows us to see other persons like they really are, beyond their appearance, social roles or status symbols. Brilliant!-
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Ein Meisterwerk? Awww, ich danke dir so sehr, Elke! Warten Sie bis zu diesem Wochenende, Sie werden in der Tat das Eröffnungskapitel zu einem Meisterwerk haben. Dass ich posten werde. Und dieses Gedicht hat mit den beiden Charakteren dieser Geschichte zu tun.
Thank you so much, Elke!Daniel
Gotisch-Surrealistisch
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Spectacular write with amazing wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously Damian forgive my tardy response you are appreciated 💕
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Powerful and hot.
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hello dearest Thomas sorry it took me so long to get back to you thank you graciously 💕
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hello beautiful Mary sorry for my late response thank you so much 💕
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thank you graciously lovely poetess 💕
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Read MoreI can contemplate too much read my rhythms far too oftensit so still that birds might landon my skin that will not soften.Age brings wisdom so they sayI'd suggest that's quite some lying What it brings is just reflectionCan't...
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hi dearest Benny enjoy your swim let the rest go stay in the moment great write 💕
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Thanks for the comment.
I’ve been putting of getting back in the pool for ages.It was great in but bloody freezing getting out.
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A great write, for a rhyming one at that. I actually left work early to rush home and complete a poem that I was scrapping together at work. And then I went to the (community) pool! A productive day, lol.
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Thanks Styx for the comment.
I’m glad you enjoyed it.
It’s a whimsical piece but says enough about the journey I and many others are on.
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Tremendous work, my friend.
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Thank you for your kind words
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the innocent way her body grooves
she’s a hurricane burning radioactive
Ah yes, the wicked women all men must watch out for. I’ve seen her and avoided the web though it was hard being they usually look so good and irresistible. Men’s will must be strong.
I like the entire thing and its message. I’d love to hear the music to it. It makes me ponder all the great bands out there that will probably never be heard.