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Read MoreI love youI have no guide to help meNothing to protect me from your stormI felt like an idiot sitting in your carYour face was so beautifulI didn't think I can love anyoneI love youWouldn't it be great if...
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Glad you enjoyed Fia. Thank you!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I agree with Fia, this is a heartfelt plea, or a confession possibly. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the comments!
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One powerful line. With many meanings. This is good.
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Appreciate that Fia. Thanks!!
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Powerful, Keith. Got me pondering.. Appreciate you, brother.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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This one line says everything. The power of opposites! They are the two sides of the same coin and prerequisites to conceive and appreciate the counterpart.
A great and meaningful statement, dear Keith!-
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Hello Elke. Thank you for the gracious comment. xo
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Right on.
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Thanks fellow poet.
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Read MoreForty years of service Numbed by the whip Forty years of service Numbed and sick Blind to the beauty Numbed by the whip You Gave all you had Gave all you had Gave all you had To the M.N.C Blind to the beauty Numbed by the whip
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Years of service and what do you have to show for it if that take it all away.
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Yes. I don’t think the system rewards people for working hard all their lives. We used to have a pension system and a retirement plan. Now you either work till you die, or retire into bankrupcy.
thanks for reading
regards
james
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Superb work, my friend.
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Thanks for reading. Sixteen tons by Tennesse Ford comes to mind.
Thanks for your words of strength.
Regards
James
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Thanks. I agree I have seen what hard work did to a man. He finally retired and then his illnesses began to destroy him fast. Sorry to get morbid. Thanks for reading
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What is the world coming to eh’ .. don’t let on, sometimes ignorance is bliss and anyway, I have yet to complete stocking the bunker 😎👍
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I am waiting for the aliens to come and see what a mess the rulers of this world have done with life.
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I reckon they know already and that’s why they haven’t sent more than just the scouting party .. 👍
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That is a thought why most do not blend well with others
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Yes.
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Thank you dear.
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This is such a heartfelt plea. I felt this.