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NAVINA posted in the group National Poetry Month
A STORM’S MIMIC EMOTIONS
Why does it rain?
When I’m sad?
Does it feel my pain?
When things go bad?How can it last long?
I’m still crying
When will it be gone?
The outside is pouring.Where is the sun?
To feel better
I just wanna go out and run
Even with this dark weatherI try to smile a bit
And when I do
I see the r…Read More![]()
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I know the timing is right for tears on everyone and how the rain comes in too. Thank you Fia, glad you liked.
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Read MoreDo not worryif you shall fall and forget.Tomorrow always comes.What’s most important is that you try.It’s a shame that we forget that everything that we dostarts off with a person just trying. The stark white of the pageUninspiredStopBreatheOccupy space inside...
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Yes.. this is the message I needed today. Thank you, Fia. I will remember during other times of pressure as well.
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Yes, we all should remember this. Thank you Detritus;))
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Words of wisdom and empowerment. Excellent!
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Thank you M.E;))
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Oh girl, you stirred up some inspiration with this one! When the joy in the doing gives out, put down the pen until it comes again. This is the kind of message needed these days.
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Yes girl, we need to hear it. Thank you, Willow ❤️
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And with each new day, creative opportunity is always promised…for the taking if so inclined. If we were machines, the concepts of emotion and feeling would be obsolete. Without those, there is no expression.
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Well said. Thank you Angel Louise
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hello veautiful Fia I used to get choked up because I though everything I wrote had to be great then later I realized I wasn’t blocked I was in my own way… this is very encouraging ❤️
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I have felt that many times, Crimsin. thank you <3
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Powerful piece & message Fia. Outstanding!!
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Thank you Vision. I’m happy you think so.;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Outstanding write my friend. Every writer can relate to this one, we’ve all been there, it’s part of the journey I believe. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I’m happy I made into the books, cuz ;))
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Sage words indeed .. and a keeper for sure .. Neville 😎🌻👍
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Thank you Neville;))
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
We Are Not Machines
Do not worry
if you shall fall and forget.
Tomorrow always comes.
What’s most important is that you try.
It’s a shame that we forget that everything that we do
starts off with a person just trying.The stark white of the page
Uninspired
Stop
Breathe
Occupy space inside with other thingsReturn…Read More
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I love it. Yea it’s true we just human and have imperfections that is normal. We aren’t like ai that thinks smart and won’t forget but we just require time. That time that many don’t wanna wait. Good write Fia ❤️
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Thank you Navina :))
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No problem….
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Yes! Just BE!! And make a difference in your being. Enjoyed reading your poem Fia. -Curt
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Thank you, Curt.🙂
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post
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Read MoreApril 7th risesnot like a dawnbut like a curtain being pulled backon a stage that has been waitingfor centuries. It is the day of empty skulls,not dead,not forgotten,just hollowed cleanby the slow, patient erosionof everything that once matteredtoo much. These skulls...
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Damn the skull is an empty chalice waiting to be filled. This is so deep with hints of darkness all through it. Nicely done
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Thank you, Fia.
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Thank you, Keith.
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“April 7th brings the other kind:
the sharp, unsentimental forgiveness
that strips you bare,
that names your mistakes
without flinching,
that empties your skull
so something truer
can echo inside it.”Powerfully penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! What an amazing write with a flow the moves like the wind my friend. So many excellent stanzas brother, but the one above hits like a freight train. I can relate. Excellent read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The Old Man at the Window and the Immortal Cats is next. Thank you, brother.
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It does feel that way when I am sad. It’s like it wants to cry for me. Lovely