Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brilliant .. sums it up perfectly .. Neville

This is fantastic poetry writing my friend! Gritty, strong, like a shot of whiskey. Colorful, great story telling, and imagery. Great work.

John

Waw raw and I can see the imagery in this.

Goldenmyst said it accurately. I concur wholeheartedly.
But, thunderbird? My god, man. At the least Seagrams 7 !!! LOL
This is very good writing. A bullseye on a dartboard of a swanky bar life.
Awesome.

Outstanding and real. Nice work.

Thank you.

I love how you wove it all together into a cohesive story. There’s an underlying homage to the women and their fire and marks left on you that ties this all together so beautifully. I can’t help but think you made a difference in their existence as well. Fire water or no, this one is brilliant

Thank you. I appreciate you.

I like the way you used the age intertwined with what is happening to you.

I love it, Brenda.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

wonderful work my dear crim. always aspiring.

Perfection is your middle name. Excellent. xox

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. By the way you forgot an r in your title. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautiful work.

That last line had me sighing. Really nice work, Crimsin

Amazing! Can feel every word in this poem. xo

A goody

Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Damian.

That is sweet. Can you imagine your heart beating hoping it was from that person.

I once found a folded up love poem along the side of a road. Perhaps someone has thrown it out the car window.
It was actually written really well. I wrote a reply to it, although I had no idea who wrote the first one, or who it was to. I just felt like it deserved an answer. Too bad they never knew that a writer had found their poem. It wasn’t written for nothing after all.
Your little poem here brings back that memory for me. So thank you for your poem, it too has meaning to us readers.