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Read MoreShall I tell you a story or keep it in a poem Shall I tell you a story or take you home Some verses are hidden secrets that should not be spilled love requited and forbidden but if I tell you, my lips would not be...
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Thank you, appreciate that;))
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A song played on a radio, as a teen-aged girl dreams of that secret crush she has. I’m sure that this lyrical gem has been played for so many young women, and men. It’s called a crush because thats what it feels like in our chests, huh!
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Yes your right. A crush feels like our chests is being crushed. Thank you for the comment
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. I really like this a lot. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian:)) appreciate that
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Chère F.,
Every time I discover more reasons to love your write to bits.
And this is also such an event.
At the end of your poem, you offer a possibility to choose. Simply wonderful, but it reminds me of a song I once wrote. A long long time ago. And its title is Bevrijdingsdag. Translated: liberation day. I wouldn’t write a song with such a title today, but that’s another story.The chorus of the song is forceful and perhaps a bit extreme. It translates like this:
You said ‘Married’ – and I said so what
I’d love to choose if I may
Don’t talk to me about divorce
Everyday’s liberation dayAnd then I asked the public:
You’ve heard it. She said ‘married’. But didn’t say who is married, so it’s up to you to choose.
– is he married
– is she married
– are they both married, but not to each otherRaise your hands!
And I would let the public decide. And I would have three songs ready to fit the decision.
A situation, prone to personal ‘colouring’. My personal colouring that is. I’m not On a stage for nothing.Yes, a bit of a long reply. But maybe an idea 💡 for if and when you’re going to do some beat poetry. The public will love you all the more for this kind of surprises. Really.
I’m a huge fan of open mic evenings; maybe I can transfer some of the excitement to you.
Other than that: keep them coming, please.Warm regards, Gus
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I do not mind long replies. I am happy that this ignited a memory and that you are encouraging me to do open mic. I would love to read it. No worries. I will use a translator. Thank you for loving my work. poems and stories.
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Very nice indeed ma’am .. Neville 😎🌻👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Amethyste wrote a new post
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Read MoreMy museI love youYou are my strength on weak daysI live for doing youYou are my ultimate pleasure.
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Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend. My muse has traveled many roads with me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes she has traveled with me too. I can tell in many ways that she is my love. 🙂 Thank you for reading. Take care.
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Beautiful. You got to love the muse.
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Yes indeed. Thank you for stopping by and reading Thomas. A good day ahead for you.
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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Read More“I don't feel pain, I don't feel alive, yet no angels in the bright moonshine.” The lady of sorrow confided to herself aloud in a whisper. One so delicate, it could vanish like flying dust should she be loud. But she was standing stoically at...
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Pretty cool, Daniel. I like the visions that it creates easily for the reader. With an artistic flair of course.
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The opening lines set a fragile, haunting mood that carries through the poem beautifully.
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Passionately penned, Amethyste. Photographs and Memories as the old Jim Croce song goes. There was a change of temperature with this write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I appreciate your feedback.
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Amethyste wrote a new post
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Read MoreThis life is hardLots of stabsMiles to runBut yet let this soul singThe song of the heart
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Chère A.,
In this time of Christmas shit
You’ve to try extra hard
To hear the most beautiful
And real songs of the heartJust à l’improvise…
I wish you a lovely weekend.
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I will try. Thank you.
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Beautifully penned, Amethyste. I always dig your precise observations my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the support Damian.
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So this is your song if only…I like it.