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Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 6 months ago

It's Coming For You

Horror, Poetry

October 23, 2025

6

Leper town found on greed and disgustfor a hundred yearsbroken deal, a false beacon of trustplundered, golden fearstoday is centennial day!time to celebratecursed, are the founders at bayso let the fog, decide their fate the fog - appears - over...

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6 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  6 months ago
  
  Yes, that was a good movie too. Their fates were sealed.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  6 months ago
  
  Thanks Fia.
- Sappho (Elke)
  6 months ago
  
  I have always seen fog as a kind of veil, wrapped around secrets and mysteries. Now I know that it can also be a good hiding place for evil spirits. My confidence is shattered. 😉 the repetition of out of the Fog! is masterfully spooky!
  A magnificent piece, my friend!
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    6 months ago
    
    I live near the bay and my neighborhood is one of the 1st areas to witness the fog rolling in. It’s quite eerie and intriguing. This is a classic film. Check it out when you have some time. Thanks Elke. xoxo
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Anything John Carpenter put his name on is a classic. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    6 months ago
    
    I agree with you. Thanks my friend
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 6 months ago

Maniac

Horror, Poetry

October 23, 2025

6

Violence he has awakened intoHarsh murdering transpiresEnticement of the fleshWhores scalped for pleasureChaotic mind, fully dementedTerror on other's, unrelentlessObsessed by crueltyMisogynistic hatred, slaughter Shotgun blows the head clean offMayhem & lunacyAlways looking, on the huntNight stalking fresh prey You were warned...

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6 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  6 months ago
  
  Never seen this one. Why do they go out when they tell them not to? lol
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    6 months ago
    
    No one listens to authority figures. Plus, if they listened there would be no movie. Thanks Fia.
- Crimsin
  6 months ago
  
  very darkly delightful ❤️
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    6 months ago
    
    Thank you Brenda. xo
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks man.
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 6 months, 1 week ago

Demanding

Poetry

October 23, 2025

25

Style means nothing without substance That’s something money can’t buy Walking through the world in a trance Long enough to embrace living this lie Social outcast learns how to survive Turning loneliness into independence Wanting to avoid the impending nosedive Sometimes caution means ride the fence Timid...

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23 Comments
- Sappho (Elke)
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  When I read your musing, a quote of Friedrich Nietzsche was the first thought that came to my mind: “You must have chaos inside to give birth to a dancing star. “It’s exactly the chaos, the self doubts, the questions upon questions, the deep reflections at night which give birth to a dancing star of inspirations writings and deep thoughts. Great work, dear Damian!
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
- Fia Naturie
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  This is a good piece of musing, Damian.
  This is so true
  “Timid people constantly read the room
  
  While they study the human psyche “
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Loved those lines as well. Appreciate you, cuz.
    
    Damian
- Drieks
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  Amazing piece Damian. Thank you for sharing 🙏
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Tim
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  I think it all comes from being wounded too many times. I identify with this very much.
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you, that has a good deal to do with it. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  6 months ago
  
  Wonderfully written Damian. Well said. Keep up the great poetry my friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support my brother. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Styxian
  6 months ago
  
  Dude, I’m not timid at all and yet I still read a room! I am extremely observant of my surroundings. It’s a crazy world yaknow!
  Your write is a crowd of personalities, interesting in each of their ways. The rhyme makes it flow really well. It’s carrying a beat all its own. Well versed Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is a crazy world, reading the room is always required. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Crimsin
  6 months ago
  
  hello dearest Damian this is excellent I can relate to the searching and lonliness of not being satisfied with pat answers ❤️
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know exactly what you mean. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  6 months ago
  
  It takes so many approaches and responses to survive these days. And not the least of which is temporary retreat and regroup. How do your pieces always seem so relevant to every moment? Prophet, I’m telling you. Keep assembling the pieces of the puzzle, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. These days reading the room and critical thinking are required to survive it seems. I will always be piecing together the puzzle, it’s what I do. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- kesnerfreds
  6 months ago
  
  There’s a real honesty here in the way you weave survival, wisdom, and self‑doubt into one puzzle feels deeply human. The closing admission about chaos being “demanding” hit especially true.🙏🏻🕊️
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, kesnerfreds. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite stanzas as well. Thank you for your continued support my friend, right back at ya. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Nick DC
  6 months ago
  
  Reminds me of the matrix with the red and blue pill. Either face reality or live in fantasy.
  
  Great ink friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- goldenmyst
  6 months ago
  
  Damian you formed this into a great poem of rumination. Very much loved the way this unfolded. So much wisdom in your words. Truly great poem my friend.
  
  John
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post

• 6 months, 1 week ago

Poem in the Rhythm of Undoing (With a Lack of Decay)

Poetry

October 22, 2025

6

is meant to undolike skin peeling away from time,like a name dissolving in the mouth. not to be readthe instant the gaze tries to fix it,but fails—gloriously. before it undoes itself, it is already noise,it is already absence,it is already the...

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6 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write per usual my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work my brother. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    6 months, 1 week ago
    
    Damian!!! Thanks.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  6 months ago
  
  Paulo!! How are you? Marvelous piece of writing. Your poetry always keep me thinking & wondering, while I balance on the edge of my mind.
  
  Peace!
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    6 months ago
    
    Insanity!!! Thanks.
- Styxian
  6 months ago
  
  The ending is a rock through a window! No peaceful moment within this write. It has an edge throughout. Impactful.
  Such a strong write!
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    6 months ago
    
    Styxian!!! Thanks.
Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”

• 6 months, 1 week ago

Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.

Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roof

Time withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk

6 Comments
- RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
  6 months ago
  
  Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months ago
    
    I am going to. By next week it should be better.
    - RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
      6 months ago
      
      I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
      
      Fia Naturie
      6 months ago
      
      I’m trying
      
      RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
      6 months ago
      
      For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
      
      Fia Naturie
      6 months ago
      
      okay
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