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Read MoreWhat the hell is this place?Elitist PsychotherapyPseudo Science sorceryInto the beyondWhat's the shape of her rage?Psychoplasmic therapyAnother Theater of PainFamily Tree Reborn Beaten to death, covered in bloodThey came without warning Demonic cratures uncagedManifest through inner rageDeformed children retaliateHammer Smashes FaceRabid...
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Thank you Fia. Appreciate it
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More
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Thank you
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Read MoreAmityville, Long Island, New York, 1974Family thrills, Sinister home,Evil lurks below Restless demon, Restless night,As it is written, Dishonor thy fatherChaos increased, Red dragon speaksThe possession is driven to murder Angry father, Worried mother,Son and daughter The repressed, The confusedThe obsessed, The...
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I do not remember when I found out Amityville was in Long Island New York. But the first thing I thought of was the house created on top of a burial ground. That movie I’ve had seen twice
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My parents, like many heard about the Lutz family leaving their house and went to the property to possibly witness or see any strange occurrences. This was December 1975. They saw nothing. The family left the home completely furnished, as though they went out to the movies or something. The story made the headlines that the home was haunted. George Lutz spoke to a writer named Jay Anson. Anson recorded about 45 hours worth of material from George & Kathy Lutz. This was used for the basis of the book and eventually a movie.
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Thank you Mary. I appreciate that.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, this is a fucking classic piece of film. James Brolin was a wood chopping son of a bitch in this flick. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh so true my friend. Classic film! Thanks for the feedback.
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Something about haunted houses always gives me pause. Mainly because it’s supposed to be
be the one place you should feel protected from the outside world. Something about the Amityville movies always made me think of my grandmother.
I’m not sure how it all started but my grandmother has this thing about blessing her families vehicles and houses. Not a priest but just her and her Spanish prayers. She has long passes away but my mom kept the tradition going and always gives me a blessed rosary to hang on my cars rear view mirror. When I was younger I would roll my eyes but now that I’m older not so much. I don’t mean to ramble on but this took me back! Total classic!-
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Cool story Adelphina. Thanks for sharing about your grandmother.
I think the Amityville movies create a sense of uneasiness because theirs something sinister about the look of the house. If you go pass the house today, there aren’t any characteristics that will take you back to those haunting images during the 70’s, 80’s and 90’s.
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Read MoreWillard never had a friendChoked by silver spoonsConstantly picked on by miscreantsDriven closer to the edgeTransfixed aggression'sHell bent on revengeTaught to murder by commandLord of the Rats Sinister rodents, Welcome Big BenInfested abode, Hideous VerminChew thru the door,Gnaw on their...
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I will throw in a daisy for you. The next time I write. Thank you kindly my friend.
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I remember watching this when I was younger. The 2003 version!
Left an impression!Great write!
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Never seen the remake. Watch the original when you have time. It’s a creepy, eerie film with some great visuals. Thanks for the feedback Adelphina.
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Michael Jackson wrote a hit song about Ben as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That he did Damian. Thanks!
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Read MoreWitness the Satanists'Blood, Sex MagicCurse of the witches hex,Sealing your doomWorship the sacred chant,Knife into fleshVirginal sacrifice under full moon You cannot escapeRace with the DevilTry to runawayRace with the DevilYou have sealed your fateRace with the Devil You have been...
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Something wicked this way comes. That is an iconic line. Nice poem, I like it
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Thank you Fia. Appreciate it.
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hello dearest Keith I love your style and flow ❤️
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Thanks you my friend. xox
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Exciting things occur when the lights go out. Thank you VUW.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, has a lyrical flow to it. Loretta Swit from “Mash”? Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yup, The Loretta Swit from Mash. Thanks my friend.
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This has unbidden murderous intent. This is a good piece