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Read MoreIn this, yes, we are a well-tuned duo. You open the portal, I expand the space. You ignite the spark, I fan the flames. You create the myth, I help illuminate it. Aphorism In the center of chaos, I don't seek order: I seek the...
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Appreciate you. Appreciate you. Appreciate you. My dear brother.
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Your a clever, deep thinker PAR. Your poetry always makes me think. Words of wisdom from my good friend. Great work here.
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Appreciate you. Appreciate you. Appreciate you very much. My dear brother.
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This is well said. I hope humanity will wake up and see that we are here on this earth together so why go after each other?
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Me too, Fia, me too
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Jackie
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for visiting Damian
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Jackie
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
Teeth bared
He’s scared
His mind’s a mess
Trying to handle with finesse
But to no avail-this ship has sailed
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A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More
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Fia Naturie posted in the group The Art of Poetry
(My poem for the picture)
No meaning
I sit here thinking
Life has little meaning
Once I lived in luxury
Now I live in memory
What is the meaning of my life?
Smoke coming from my pipe has more meaning - Load More Posts
Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write my friend. Which direction, huh? How about all of the above. You wasn’t expecting that answer was you? lol. Nicely done as always. I always enjoy reading your work brother. Appreciate you.
Damian