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Read MoreAnd finally, you did the obvious.You cut your nails.You did things so seemingly without meaning. And yet, as you swept away the dustfrom one gesture to the next,you opened a tiny crack.Almost nothing, almost a laughthrough which an ancient wind...
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Thanks 🌻
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Cleverly penned, PAR. Phenomenal write my friend there is always depth and layers to your work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks my brother. 🌻
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Read MoreJust hear those lay bells jinglingRing-ting-tingling tooCome on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay together with you Outside the hoes are callinthey’ll be no blue ballin, "Yoo hoo"Come on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay ride together with you Get it up, get...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Only the Dr. Seuss of horror could take this Christmas classic and flip it on its head. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend.
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I was laughing so hard at this. Really good rendition Keith;))
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Appreciate that Fia. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo
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Oh what fun it is to ride!!! 😂😂😂
This is so funny and creative! Thank you very much for this wonderful Christmas gift, dear Keith!-
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Thank you Elke. Hope you had a great holiday my friend.xo
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A scorched-earth parody that weaponizes familiarity. The humor comes less from punchlines and more from how far it’s willing to push desecration of a cultural comfort song. Not subtle, but very intentional.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Read MoreShe likes it long in the backShe likes it short on the top and the sidesShe likes it back in blackShe wants to go for a mustache ride I am your mullet manYes I amGonna take you for a ride...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. It reads like lyrics my friend. Excellent write. “Do you know the mullet man? Who lives on dreary lane. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I sure do my friend. He lives across the street from me! Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreEveryday it's on repeatdrink your coffee move your feetTake your brain and then disposewhere it goes, nobody knowsJust keep movingjust keep workingDesperate systemmental prisonKeep on the tracksdo not look backJust keep working hoursthat devoursHopes we're dreamingit's deceivingThis is madnesscostumed...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write about the never-ending loop called everyday life my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the feedback. Thank you
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“Some sentences arrive already wounded” is a powerful line. I really appreciated how you treat silence and density as material, not absence.
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Thank you, dear fellow poet.
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This is beautiful, and it felt peaceful in its write.
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Thanks Fia. It was from the deep of my heart that I wrote it to our fellow poet Styxian. His words made me happy so I got inspired to write some and offer them to him.
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Beautifully penned, PAR. Such a heartfelt tribute to Mark (Styxian) my friend. He’s a class act and a brilliant writer who always takes the time to comment words of praise and positivity to members of this community. Nicely done my brother. You never cease to amaze. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you back my brother-friend.
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A given stone will turn to a polished shine when kept tightly in the palm.
It’s something solid to keep us mindful and kinships and the strength of that.
I am a very down to earth person. I actually do have a few rocks that I picked up from somewhere, because they caught my eye.
I enjoy your writing a great deal, Paulo. It is maturely done, strong in its messages. That is why I bother to join writing sites; to find and read quality material that will inspire me to keep my own motivation going.
Thank you for this, and for your contributions of writing.-
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All the best to you, my friend.
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This is as amazing tribute. Mark was touched by this. I remember him calling me and telling me about this write.
I think he forgets how inspiring he is with his writes and comments.
It’s awesome when he gets a reminder!Merry Christmas 🎄!
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Merry Christmas 🎄! Thank you! Mark is really an inspiring poet and I am very happy to have him reading my humble words.
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hello dearest Par this is deep that you take notice of such things tells me how wonderful you are ❤️