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Read MoreI tried to feel somethingI loved her & she loved meI don't know what happenedEverything was going wellThen all of a sudden, I got cold like there was a stranger next to meI tried to get rid of the...
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Thanks!
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That one took a turn. Great write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it. Thanks
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Thank you
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Best part: “I got cold like there was a stranger next to me…” thanks for the great read!
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Thank you Daniel. I appreciate you.
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Visions, this packed a mighty punch. You wrote your emotions out with the dexterity of a poet who can really make his feelings known with no room for doubt. Well done.
John
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Hello John. This was based on an old relationship I had. Similar thoughts and emotions ran through me at that time. Thanks my friend.
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Read MoreAfter a night of some intense bowling, I saw this awesome pair of bowling shoes near the counter. They weren't black and red. They were yellow & blue. Plus, they were my size. The colors looked great! I decided...
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Green & yellow…wonder what’s special about that combo. Dreams can be such a trip. Happy bowling!
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Not sure. As long as this dream doesn’t become a reality, I’m good. Thanks Willow.
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Maybe one day we’ll go together. Thanks Adira.
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Visions, there is not a dull moment in this poem. A darkly lit star of a poem. You write this so superbly. Straight out a horror movie script as only a master screenplay writer can create.
John
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Thanks John. I appreciate your kind words.
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Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. That’s what I think. Kick ass write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You rock Damian. Thanks!!
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Read MoreWe are hideousWe mate and create something horrificSluts and killersMean blood spillersWhores and fuckersFools and suckersMonster fucking dadsSisters born with crabsMonster slut mothersIncest fueled brothersWe the monstersOne nation under a demigodWith obligation and injustice for all
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I feel we are part of a Stephen King novel sometimes. Great write.
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Good Stephen King novels. Some of his novels are godawful. Thanks Jade.
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That is true. Thanks Adira.
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I still thinking Matrix meets Terminator. Way things are going though, could end up like, The Running Man. Powerfully penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can see it happening. Appreciate the comments.
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Read MorePropheteering Trickster Wiley CoyoteFrom the bar associationRivals great OzymandiasFor the hourglass sands of immemorialTo sift like silt through the YangtzeWhile a British merchant colonist in ShanghaiLooking dapper in his colonel’s uniform with walking caneGlimpses through his monocle The misty mysticism...
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I like how you bring all the religious patriarchs into this piece.
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Thanks so much Fia, much appreciated. Been grooving to Kerouac’s poetry and got inspired. Glad you liked the result, my friend.
John
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Super clever poem John. Intelligent and well executed.
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Thank you so much Visions. I have been tripping on Kerouac’s poetry. Glad you liked my poem, my friend.
John
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Brilliantly penned, John. This write has a lot of depth, a fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Gracias mi amigo. Very much appreciate your read and taking in my poem. Thank you so very much.
John
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Well Damn. That was a eureka moment.