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Read MoreI capture the wordsright where I am embracing themthey mean something......to mea part of my beingthoughts...feelings...but I release themalready knowing......they'll become...moretranslated from someone else's......right where they are...perspective...see?& they grow & growtaking on new meanings...with each new translation it's the beauty of...
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Thank you 😊
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ive always thought words had some magic to them… You just proved it
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Words are magic! They can build & destroy…sometimes at the same time. Thank you 😊
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I concur with Sam’s comment with just one more word ‘brilliant’…🙏
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Thank you 😊
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this is beautiful Willow I’m feeling you on this as is the wind is poetry in you 💕
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Brenda, your comments always bring a smile to my soul. Thank you 🧡
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Cor blimey Ma’am, I think you just hit the proverbial nail on it’s head and nailed poetry .. Beautifully pinned to the page .. Neville
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I’ve found translation is usually at least slightly different for every translator. The different perspectives always intrigue me. Thank you 😊
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Beautifully penned, Willow. The essence of a writer lies within the words they choose to tell the tale. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I always know my point of origin. But I also know translation depends on the reader’s point of origin. And therein lies the mystery. Thank you, my friend
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Never ending feels. It’s a wonderful thing.
Great ink
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I love seeing where it takes others. Like ripples spreading outward. Thank you, my friend
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If our words are a mirror for someone else’s feelings, there is success in that transaction.
Love it.
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It’s the beautiful thing about poetry. The connections felt when words resonate with someone. Thank you
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Read MoreIt was my third assignment for the Cohol Tribune. My boss thought it would be best for me to go and interview an upcoming environmentalist, named Caleb. Stewart. I didn't realize I would need to travel to Scotland for...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Wonderful storytelling, it kinda reminds me of a sitcom my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, I would love to write one of those someday.
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I enjoyed this. Comparing the kiss to drinking water is imaginative–I like it. I need to “see” the action in a story, and that was easy with this. Probably because I’m a very foolish (and hopeless) romantic, I feel bad when romance has to take a back seat to life goals. Maybe she’ll see him again?
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Thank you, Sam. She has to choose who she is going to be with among the shot glasses. I appreciate you reading this.
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I just love how this unfolds. The character development of the Scottish man is truly outstanding. And your grasp of the Scottish lingo is truly amazing. I love how you made the Scottish words so clearly understandable yet authentic. And the story telling is fabulous.
John
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Thank you . I tried with the language to make it sound authentic
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Read MoreCalling all those who fish I have an idea that's delish Can you write about the catch Not the one that you threw back I have a Twist in mind Not all fish are one of a kind The catch can be by sea or...
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this makes me think of metaphors for getting with someone romatically and going to the flea market and haggling for the write price haggling with a whore sorry Fia it’s the images your challenge brought 💕
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It’s fine. Go for it and write crimsin
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I cast desire upon the tide,
My fingers tremble for her weight
A secret urge I cannot hide,
My bait a promise, sweet as fate.She rises shimmering, bare and bold,
Her flanks and curve inflame the air
Enticing as forbidden gold,
She stirs my blood with fevered dare.She fights, resists, with sultry grace,
Her finish slick against my skin;
The pull, the yield, our swift embrace
She swallows lust, I drink her in.On shore, still dripping wet with lust,
Her form revealed, full-bodied, wild
We meet as lovers, freed and flushed
My catch, my craving, reconciled-
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Oh wow, Peter that was good
Thank you for participating
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Read MoreHow can I miss you? When you never go away Water’s wet sky is blue Perpetual victim falls prey Outside in the distance A stranger lies in wait Steeped in persistence Always guarding the gate When did I get wise? Is the proper question As soon as a crow...
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Haha great end there, friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked it as well. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Anything is on the table, maybe even spoken word. Never say never. The song I’m working on, I literally had to start writing lyrics to it. None of the old words were fitting the vibe. Also, I haven’t tried to write a song for many summers now. I kinda forgot sometimes the music leads the dance. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I remember this piece. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoy it now. Nice Damian.;))
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool! Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I sometimes have that effect, it’s just the lyricist in me. lol. I always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Something tells me this is so good .. I got a foot that can’t stop tapping .. 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brilliant write, enjoyed this read..