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Willow wrote a new post
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Cor blimey Ma’am, I think you just hit the proverbial nail on it’s head and nailed poetry .. Beautifully pinned to the page .. Neville
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Beautifully penned, Willow. The essence of a writer lies within the words they choose to tell the tale. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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If our words are a mirror for someone else’s feelings, there is success in that transaction.
Love it.
j.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Wonderful storytelling, it kinda reminds me of a sitcom my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I enjoyed this. Comparing the kiss to drinking water is imaginative–I like it. I need to “see” the action in a story, and that was easy with this. Probably because I’m a very foolish (and hopeless) romantic, I feel bad when romance has to take a back seat to life goals. Maybe she’ll see him again?
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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this makes me think of metaphors for getting with someone romatically and going to the flea market and haggling for the write price haggling with a whore sorry Fia it’s the images your challenge brought 💕
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I cast desire upon the tide,
My fingers tremble for her weight
A secret urge I cannot hide,
My bait a promise, sweet as fate.She rises shimmering, bare and bold,
Her flanks and curve inflame the air
Enticing as forbidden gold,
She stirs my blood with fevered dare.She fights, resists, with sultry grace,
Her finish slick against my skin;
The pull, the yield, our swift embrace
She swallows lust, I drink her in.On shore, still dripping wet with lust,
Her form revealed, full-bodied, wild
We meet as lovers, freed and flushed
My catch, my craving, reconciled
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Dear D,
You still got it. An incredible meter. Made me want to sing this. The imagery played in my head of a dark bus stop. Why? No clue. But the players in this piece for me, were intertwined. Trying to run but wanting to stay. I have a longer version running in my head but I’ll spare you the directors cut😊
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Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Anything is on the table, maybe even spoken word. Never say never. The song I’m working on, I literally had to start writing lyrics to it. None of the old words were fitting the vibe. Also, I haven’t tried to write a song for many summers now. I kinda forgot sometimes the music leads the dance. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕
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goldenmyst wrote a new post
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Brilliant write, enjoyed this read..