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Read More"How long does she have?" asked the man behind the counter, stooping in his lab coat as he assessed the prescription."The doctor doesn't know. Perhaps a few weeks."The elderly gentleman empathetically smiled, his ocean blue eyes regarding his customer....
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Thank you, M.E.! I like to give you the unexpected…
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Highly imaginative, Lady
Full of suspense sexuality and devotion.
It’s been a while since I have read story telling this good
Reminds me of the old erotica short stories I used to
read when I was youngerGreat job DK
Naaj
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Thanks, Naaj! I’m so glad you liked it. I was looking for something sweet and suspenseful. I accidentally ran into that internal Hawaiian love story when I was studying the flower and incorporated into the piece. It’s legitimate Hawaiian folklore, and I thought it was pretty cool.
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Indie, thank you so much for reading and your specific recommendations. I’m sure you realize that the name, Charlie, was specifically chosen to surprise the reader in the way you mentioned – still, I like your idea to make it more obvious when the curtain finally rises on her identity. I’ll check on the parking lot as well.
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Thank you, HJ! I’m glad you liked it!
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work. Hot. Well crafted and steamy.
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Thank you, Thomas. I’m glad you liked it.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, DK. A steamy erotic write, with fabulous storytelling, and an incredible imagination my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re awesome, Damian! Thank you!
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Brilliantly written. Well executed. Sex, sex and more sex. This is some hot motherfucking shit!
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Well, hopefully more than just sex – but thank you! I’m definitely into sex!
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Never cease to impress. Always well written and deep (pun intended) lol. The story flows smoothly and hott hott hott 🔥 😋
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Thank you, Daniel. My goal is to impress you and, well… excite you.
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I keep missing the reply button!
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So are you, girl, and thank you! No apologies for tears, but kisses for cleanup!
xoxo
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You’re getting good at this😉
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I’m so glad you think so, Peter! Thank you!
xoxo
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![Profile picture of Poetic Gawdess]()
A beautiful description of the transition to the afterlife. I’ve got chills, morbidly beautiful. I’ve enjoyed this, well done D.K xx
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I’m so glad you liked it, PG! Thank you!
xoxo
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The last stanza, I got the chills. Nice. Xoxo
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I love giving you chills!
xoxo
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Sheesh! This gave me Bram’s Dracula vibes! Excellent!
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I’m a huge fan of that movie, though I haven’t read the book. That’s on my bucket list.
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Yes! A Beautiful film and book. “)
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oh Peter… you haven’t seen anything yet… this woman is a witch…
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Noooooo!!! Peter! Peter! (pumpkin eater)… I’m a GOOD witch, Peter! I’m the GOOD witch of the North or maybe it’s the South. Shit! Which fucking direction? Come back here! Come back!
Dammit, Sam! I was ‘THIS’ close, and you ruined it. I should never have taken that apple out of your mouth until I was ready to sit on your face.
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The whole piece is fantastic 👏 and the last stanza is remarkable poetry! Bravo!
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Wow, thank you, Daniel. I love your comments. Truly, I do. Thanks for following me!
xoxoxo
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Dark. My bed sheets will be over my head tonight after reading this. Nice!
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Oh, stop it, Keith. Pull your sheet down. I want to get a look at your neck and… wait, what is this? A tent pole?
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a tent pole is raised at night and in the morning. Come see what lurks beneath my sheets!!
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That thing operates just like clockwork
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Oh stop, Mr. Dragon! Your poetry is amazing… publication worthy. You have incredible depth and vision. I always love you insight on my stuff! Thank you!
xoxo
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Damn girl, you’re good with metaphor. Love that last stanza, it’s killer..
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Wow, thank you so much, Pandy! I’m honored. Thanks for reading!
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You’re welcome. It was an enjoyable read!
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreDeep with inA soundEscaped!Catching the airShock and aweCreated the first audienceForwardSymbols and representationsCaptured thoughtOn walls and clayForwardLife ripped from rootsFibrous parchmentCharcoal wordsKnowledgeForwardQuill and inkThin papyrusLines replace symbolsLoops entice the eyesForwardScreens and buttonsGreen and yellowFlashing cursiveForwardTexts, short formsMeanings misunderstoodNew vocabularyEver...
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Always move forward. Never in reverse. Cool poem Fia.
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Right, never go backward. Thank you, Keith
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Thank you, Dragon-fire. I want to know what’s next.
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This makes me want to chase down a Woolly Mammoth and scribble my initials on his testicles.
“We didn’t start the fire!
It was always burning
since the world’s been turning!”-
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Girl, you hit me up with Billy Joel? Love that song. Dk you know I am 4’11”? I will need an extension later to reach mammoth testicles. You are a little taller than me. You will have to climb on my shoulders. lol
You are funny. Thank you, Dk., xoxo
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Love the flow and the imagery is stellar my friend. Nice spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you ☺️ appreciate that Damian
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Fia, our world is ever evolving, but it’s refreshing to have you take us through time. Can’t wait to see what’ll come next. Brilliant piece my dear friend. xx
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Thank you P.G. Let us see what’s next
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read Moresolitude is a self efficient temple welcomed... greeted... like the warmth of the womb... anger is the fuel of turmoil seduced... infused... spawning the words of poets... misery is the darkest mistress beautiful... deceitful... wicked in every manipulation... pain spreading through the veins crimson... suspicion... making colors bleed truth... reunited with the past forgotten spiritual... ritual... skeletons restrained...
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That was amazing. I love the growly voice. Damian;))
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Fia. So glad you liked the write and performance my friend. The growl was the only thing vocally I never questioned myself about. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous work. You nailed it.
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the piece my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool idea with the vocals and the words are killer. Nice job Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the piece my friend. Yeah, it was a way to incorporate with the death growl. Which I thought went well juxtaposed to the spoken part. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’ve always enjoyed the voices that have gravel in their DNA. This is a little different for you but still 100% you. And brilliant! Love seeing all the facets in different light, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the performance my friend. It took me almost 15 years to be comfortable enough to share these pieces. I have three more, but I can’t find the words to them. lol. I was not in the best place in those recordings, I was drinking like a fish, which makes sense being that I’m a Pisces. lol. But it was different, because I was different. I was not the person I am now. But I’m not afraid to be me anymore, so why sit on the material. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian!!! Oh Damian, this is….. Wow, it’s not often I’m rendered speechless. I like the transition from your voice to the death growl. Very masculine, very sexy. It’s like that old saying, “two sides of the same coin” I think that applies here…maybe, lol. Same person, two different sides of him but they have the common goal of being released. The death growl was the cherry on top of this beautiful piece. I applaud you my friend! xx
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, P.G. So glad you enjoyed this piece. It does have a, Dr. Jekyll, Mr. Hyde kinda vibe. Glad you loved the growl, very cool. At one time in history it was kinda frowned upon by the masses to death growl growing up. Times change or so they say. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Very impressive, Damian. I really like your voice and the lyrics were perfect.
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you enjoyed the performance my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Great ink. It had a great flow.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nice work, sir. I will write more later (I got here in a weird way and wasn’t going to leave a review at all, but I saw at the bottom of this piece there was your audio file — with another that has this piece read (horribly) by an AI voice. You can leave it if you wish, or you can delete it by adding “excludetx” as another tag on the page where you added this piece to your pages. In any case, I’ll be back when I can spend more time here. As a for
Former performance artist and now a humble poet (well, at least, a poet), I want to enjoy this at my leisure.
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Nice work, sir. I will write more later (I got here in a weird way and wasn’t going to leave a review at all, but I saw at the bottom of this piece there was your audio file — with another that has this piece read (horribly) by an AI voice. You can leave it if you wish, or you can delete it by adding “excludetx” as another tag on the page where you added this piece to your pages. In any case, I’ll be back when I can spend more time here. As a for
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Fixed it brother. Didn’t realize the AI voice was even there. Thank you for your kind words, FD. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWhat will you do when I'm gone? Will you pick the scabs off love to make you bleed again or cry such salty tears that fall to the earth turning it to sand? Perhaps you'll wear my favourite jumper or my...
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This is achingly beautiful, Peter.
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Thank you Fia…. quiet piano music does that.
Strange creatures we are….hungry for sex and even more hungry for peace.💋
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This stirs so many thoughts & emotions. Haunting…
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Tugging on my heartstrings there.. so sad but so beautiful. I’ll think about this poem for awhile…thank you for sharing and also for opening my mind to the more meaningful things we take for granted… xx
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Thank you ladies..your are all too kind.💋💋💋
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I didn’t expect it to go that way! I am not into short stories but that was steamy and rejuvenating. Well done, DampKitten!