Eyes of a hidden woman

Willow
1 year, 1 month ago

There are so many great lines in this one. I think the one that sticks the strongest with me is:

“Complacency is a recipe for disaster”

Not paying enough attention to the gravity of a situation is so dangerous. All it takes is a single grain to tip the scales. Gotta watch the build-up. Your mind never ceases to amaze me, my friend
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 1 month ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite lines as well, though I had other lines I liked as well. You’re spot on as always. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Thomas W. Case
1 year, 1 month ago

tREMENDOUS WORK.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 1 month ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Tim
1 year, 1 month ago

Coming to a dark truth is scary after a long search isn’t it?
Favorite line: Distractions occupy the symbol minded
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 1 month ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is quite scary, it definitely woke me up. lol. I loved that line as well, one of my favorites. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 1 month ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved that line as well. There were quite a few I loved in here. Appreciate you.

Damian
RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
1 year, 1 month ago

G’mornin’, Damian 🌤
The enjoyment of your fine writes goes well with this hot wake up mug-a lapsang souchong.

Such a beautifully rendered, smoothly flowing set of unmetered Quatrains (in a-b-a-b spot-on rhymes) sing a sad song, indeed.
They say, “We must play the cards we’re dealt!” But, I, as You, have obviously been dealt some tragically sorry hands.
The one worst aspect of romantic relationships your keenly-writ lines bring to mind, is the painful reality of unrequited feelings and emotions.

“Understand I’m living the fucking song
And your loyalty lies in remaining numb”

Brilliant work, Syr Poet … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Rascal🖌
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 1 month ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Rascal. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Terrible hands indeed, and I didn’t do much in my early life to help matters. Like becoming an alcoholic, just lead me farther off the path. This one has layers, on one hand there is nothing wrong with a romantic relationship poem, so I don’t mind it being viewed as such. But this one is more about a songwriting partner/friend who I loved like a brother. He was family, until that was no longer possible. They kinda overlap. lol. Thank you for your wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
    1 year, 1 month ago
    
    Thanks for clearing the relationship … just read again and it makes perfect sense.
    
    Been there, done that!
    
    A thought: Ya might consider saying what you did to me in the Summary for others to enjoy this piece all the more.
    
    Thanks, Damian, for your appreciation! ⁓ RJ

Damian DeadLove
1 year, 1 month ago

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Crimsin
  1 year, 1 month ago
  
  thank you dearest Damian most gracioulsy I wasn’t sure how this would be received 💕 have a good day…

Alexandria
1 year, 1 month ago

This is magnificent.
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 1 month ago
  
  Thank you, Alexandria.
  - Alexandria
    1 year, 1 month ago
    
    You’re welcome. I love your work.
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 1 month ago

Phenomenal write, Daniel. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Eyes of a hidden womanOffline

Posts

Comments

Views

My Friends

My Recent Posts

You weren’t brave enough to be loved

My Friends

My Recent Posts

You weren’t brave enough to be loved

New Report

Close