can you give me directions to this lake… I have to have a good talk with that lady…

Thank you so much Timmy appreciate it;))

This is wonderful. Let’s take a walk there. Cool write.

Thank you, Angel. I do not know who the woman was by the lake. I closed my eyes and that’s what happened. I’m glad that it touched you and made you think of the Beatles; that’s cool.

Thank you, Adira—blessings to you.

Has anyone figured out how to edit on this site? There’s a change I want to make.

Please go to the dashboard. There is a pen. Click on it and you can edit your work.

Awesome write. Dreams and nightmares are our warped realities.

Yes, you understand what I was saying. Thank you.

Exactly, Indie. Thank you.

Love this entreaty poem. Indeed we seek a way out of the darkness and it often helps to have a helping hand from someone we can trust. Truly a beautiful nocturne poem that resonated in the chambers of my soul.

John

Love the ending of this, and I love the succinct texture. You add depth as you go until the whole piece becomes a metaphorical journey. I like where you take this.