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Appreciate you back!
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For me this started out soft then built up to an emotional break down. Really good Par
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Thank you my dear.
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Read Moren the middle of the night,I got up thirsty. And I went to the kitchen To drink a glass of water; Iit was 2 o'clock And everybody was sleeping, But the television was on; I got surprised; I remembered very wellI...
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Damn Televisions.
There’s this pale girl with long black stringy hair that keeps crawling out a well and through my screen.Actually, I love this mystery of this. Very Stephen King. Nocturnally disturbing.
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Thank you.
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Read MorePrecious, yet brittle like a fiddle. Delicate, frail, alas cracked in the middle. Riddled by plagues, plagued by a riddle. Critically acclaimed yet worshipped by little.Pill popper's delight. Stage fright amongst a plethora of other might be reason why...
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Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…
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Thank you for reading/listening!
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian!
I’m so happy you like it! 🙏🏻
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This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.
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Thank you so much Fia!
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Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”You have some great lines in this piece.
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Thank you so much DK ❤️
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Read MoreMy mind escapes my thoughtsThe waves crashAs I burnThe ocean coolsSerenity is what I yearnThe tide comes inAs I go outThe air filled with hopeI scream, no one hears me shoutA pleasant day here on the shoreI'm steeped in...
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Powerful work. Excellent.
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Appreciate the comments Thomas, Thanks!!
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Absolutely beautiful poetry.
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Hello Alexandria. Thank you!!
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Yesssss! The ocean is the cure. Beautiful homage to nature’s healing powers.
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Always the cure. Thanks Pinkdreams.
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Beautifully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Read MoreWhat happened to your bodyYou used to be so good lookingIt looks like a storm ripped through your eyesLike you were rung out to dryPasty, dry skinSagging, paint peelingWhat?No shitCrystal Meth?That shit tore you upYou look like you've been...
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When you look
Almost
Alive
Are definetly
Someone’s last words…-
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I don’t know who said it but I know that I heard it somewhere. Thanks PAR.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Addiction will take everything a person was or ever will be. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Absolutely. It wears you down till you have nothing left in you. Thanks my friend.
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Powerfully penned, PAR. Like the depth of this write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian