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Thank you Willow. You are right its the nuances. <3
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. It’s the minute details isn’t it? Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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This is a very reflective piece.
I can sense a lot of careful concentration from the writer.
I admire the determination throughout the stanzas.
This is a dark but incredible read. x
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Pitch
There is dark
And there is pitch
It’s funny how dark can feel comforting
And pitch is where the nightmares make a homeI see your silhouette in the dark
Envisioning warmth from lips
Sounds that roll like sweet butter toffee off the tongue
And I know there is only one thing left to doThen there is the pitch
Alone and n…Read More5 Comments-
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Very good .. but scary vibe too. Great work ….
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Thank you, Navina;)
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Of course 🤗
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Love it when you’re pitch dark, Fia. HJx
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Thank you Hjx
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Read MoreBlow Daddy Front seat At a railroad crossing Long freight train moving slowly Eyes closed She’s working her magic Deep South Things amble along He’s about to release Last car passes Horns honk He spews Onward with ecstasy Rear view mirror Guy behind him is pissed Let him wait
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Haha,,,I love how you show what is happening all around. Then the let’m wait had me smiling
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This man doesn’t just cum and go.
Need time to enjoy the after glow.
That fuck bag can wait …Thx Fia
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Hey man, how’s it going? It’s been a while since I read your posts. Great write. No apologies here. Fuck em!
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Hey Keith
Word up ?
Haven’t written much since the DUP demise but thought I should contribute some smut again !!Thx bro
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Hi P.,
I may have told you I’m a quarter French.
And in France you can get away with pretty much anything as long as you mind your language.
Like this one. Direct, no unnecessary chatter, love it!
Needless to say I’m a huge fan of your writes.
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There used to be TV show called DRAGNET. The main character played a police detective and he was known for saying “just the facts” .
So Gus, that’s what I modeled my writing on. Just the facts. Say what I want to say and not much more.A blow job doesn’t need many words, just the passion of someone giving and someone getting …
Thanks for your comment…
Stay tuned
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Passionately penned, Speak. Another excellent write my friend. You always bring you A-game when it comes to telling a story or painting us a picture. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian
I don’t writhe much anymore but occasionally a thought comes to mind and I pen it.
Appreciate the nod !
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Hahaha, don’t know if you intended the humor but it’s there. What else is there to do while waiting on a mile of rail cart. To be honest we really miss those long trains passing by forcing the entire south to slow down even more. America doesn’t use but a fraction of it’s railway potential anymore, we use to move shit
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Humor, mirth and a little attitude …
I’ll tell you one thing, that woman knows what she’s doing …
She calls it her salvation à la mode ….
I call it bliss
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Simple…but so emotional. Good one, Fia.
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Thank you , Atticus;))
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A wonderful piece of poetry Fia. This one hits home, literally.
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Thank you, Vision;))
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Yeah…so much said in this. My daughter talks of not belonging anywhere. She’s not Mexican enough for that side of her genealogy and not white enough for the other. Never accepted in either. This cataloging of labels in a stolen land is mind boggling and saddening to me
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This excellent write tells it like it is my friend. Amazingly done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
My Land
I was told this was home
I was given it on silver plater
They fail to tell me that I would have to steal itWords written on paper was crafted beautifully
Penmanship to die for
That was it…
The hidden messageTo die for
I can not take what is not mine
Can land really be mine
The oil and coal pillage from m…Read More2 Comments-
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In Indigenous culture and belief, no one owns the land, we inherit it and are part of it and must share and protect it, leaving it in better shape for future generations. I think this is a much better culture, belief, and morality than what we have in today’s world. I like your poem because it points to this kind of understanding. A very fitting…Read More
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Thank you Curtis;))
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It’s all in the details. The little nuances that leans elegantly one direction or the other. This one takes me places