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Read MoreHating writing? But having felt great about writing? What is the secret? You just have to bleed into the page, no matter if it’s good or not good enough! Write like the ice rain in winter… tapping the window panes hard...
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Yes, the secret to writing is simply to do it.
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Read MoreWhen days are punctuated with a swirl of a penAnd breaths are held waitingfor the moment that thoughtand reality becomes one Somewhere in my twilight mindWords were written and sentOn wings translucent and etherealSummoning you to me You never answerAs I...
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I have done a fair amount of cursing in my day, Fia.
But the muse turns a blind ear.
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I agree with you, thank you
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Sometimes it feels like certain people are drawn into your life for different reasons, not always for communication or connection, but for maybe even deeper philosophical meanings than even those can provide (I recommend all the Stoics, of course) It always pays to patient…and observant. Good form and thoughtfulness.
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Thank you and yes certain people are drawn into your life for different reasons.;))
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Always dig your musings my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you ;))
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A very striking and succinct piece. A fire burns in these verses.
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Thank you, James;))
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Your writing always conveys your emotions very precisely, emotionally. I mean this: many thanks for sharing what appear to be deep, deep feelings. Can only hope that time will lessen the pain felt as soon as can, Fia.
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Thank you emmagreen ;))
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This felt like a travelling within the mind and being trapped.
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Ok.
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Read More“A foul mouth bitch is worse than a car wreckThat’s why a fist or a dick sometimes need to put them in check, “Disrespect in any form a motherfucka can never let rideSo like an icy street that...
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Terrific write
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hello dearest Benny thank you graciously❤
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we own our choices good or bad. And for those we regret, we can ask forgiveness and do what we can of good deeds to even up the ledger. Similar to what the Chorus in Oedipus spoke of at his end.
Fate took him in one direction…he attempted to take himself as far as he could in the other before his death.
Really good piece.
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hello dearest Jacob I do my best and it is hard to let go of regret but I ask forgiveness and I do try to focus on being positive thank you for your thoughts on this❤
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I really appreciate an honest piece like this. The inner monologue was captivating. Thanks for sharing it.
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thank you graciously dearest poet I often do that I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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“Tap the window panes hard”–yes, it seems the only way to get one to notice poetry. Not the favorite genre of so many…
They seem not to want to work a little to find something of value in the words.
I really like this…Daniel.
j.