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    Too Many

    So many Had to burn ‘emBad days reflect my sad facefeeling fractured space behind my sternumNobody likes me.I’m pretty sure it’s because there’s nobody like me Not even my shadow beside me can settle the light See?The light shifts...

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    • Thank you so much! It means the world to me. Truly. 💕

    • Very cool! Hey we like you via your writes! You have a lot going on in your head, so therefore you are not boring right? LOL
      I like how you search for what works for you, creativity wise. It reads well as a poem, and then the boom as a song.
      This is great stuff.

    • Truly enjoyed the read then when I reached the bottom and pushed play, it completely elevates your write. Honestly, I enjoy reading first and thinking about how it will sound when I push play
      at the bottom. It’s like the music aspect is desert after the meal/read lol
      Hope that makes sense.
      Keep killing it!

    • hello dearest Drieks we need hope and no one likes me don’t feel bad…it doesn’t matter what circle I’m in I don’t fit one on one I do great in groups not at all… ps I like you I just have failed to comment much of late… this write you should be proud of ❤️

    • “I’m the echo in a room that never speaks
      Nobody likes me
      Because there’s nobody like me
      I’m the secret even silence couldn’t keep.”

      Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics per usual my friend. That chorus above, next level wordplay! Once again your arrangement highlights your words. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Oh, my god this is so good! I just played this so my wife could hear you again (and me) and it is just phenomenal! And what an incredible voice! Give her some love, girl. Plus the music and arrangement, everything is top notch!

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    jilted

    feeling it all I dwell in the paineach infliction fills me with desirescreaming hurt I'm in love with youyou love me but you're not in love with meyou push me away, then pull me backwith encouragement, I'm getting closer...

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    faded

    I'm dreaming in colorsfading friends and ideasthey emerge when I createquietly reminding me about what I thinkwhat troubles my mindmy thoughts find all of you a lotmy loneliness cradles me I miss you greatlya faded kiss from long agoyou...

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    • Marvelous write Brenda. You always capture the emotions and feelings so perfectly.

    • hello beautiful one thank you graciously for the love her it’s felt ❤️

    • Who’s to say when our godhead or universe should speak to each of us. There may be an unknown equation that determines when the voices appear. Is it possible that others are impersonating our universe and we’re reacting to feedback. Just a question Lady, tight

    • God as I understand him created the demons…they are a part of our universe…God himself is very dark look at the world and even nature it’s not hard to tell when he is pissed off just people pretend they don’t…he has instruments of darkness to experience the other aspects of his personality as well as being kind humble and a genius… when I complain about innocence he tells me you don’t know that being or what they need… so there it is the way I understand things ❤️

    • you too sweet lady good morning ❤️

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    vampire empire

    with culted bane I speak profaneobscure morose, masturbating my insanitydilligently scribing my death daystime spent in the company of demonstalking to the world through a fogno one to tell, no one believes meon specters and ghostsfaulty little imperfection I...

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    Erection

    I like it, that moment we are on bed andHe is erected, andTurns over me, andI am on the verge of having this erection,In-between,Inside.

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