Powerful and courageous…

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Thanks Adira

This one has bones & flesh…& teeth. Good to see your words again

So insightful and well written

Much respect

Naaj

Oh my goodness, Tim. This is just amazing… a three-way allusion. Such a beautiful interchange of reference from one to the other… withdrawal symptoms, sex, literary elements. I see the analogies melded together, the physical and emotional relationships. This is really smart. I love how you use rhyme in this piece and the second person narrative approach, which makes it more powerful. Very talented.

Your words are sure fire penetration.
You’re a constant resonation ❤️ more please and please.

Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’ve only experienced one in SD and it was freaky…nice look into your perception

Cool structure…

Looking forward
to following the series…

Thank you dear.