This was so perfectly executed that I can’t tell which is whose voice. Powerfully descriptive imagery,both of you 🙌

This is the best thing of yours that I ever read.
You should be congratulated.
Congratulations dear.

You are welcomed at least that much. 🙏🏼

“Jim is correct” I like the sound of that. But really, I appreciate that and the fact that you see the wonder of this poem tells me a lot about you too. 🙂 💚

😊 Thank you dear.

TY – too kind would imply harm of some kind, like killing you with it. I think you don’t mean that tho. I think you mean you like me. I like you as far as I can tell from here 😉

You mean out of my freakin’ mind hysterical or funny?

🙂
be well

The bees chasing the flowers over and over again. We are chasing something, but what is it?

Hello Elke. Outstanding story. A stellar piece of writing that captures so much detail and intrigue. A perfect piece for this time of year. Well done my friend. xo

Quite the riveting tale, Sappho! It was very clever of you to switch up the common portrayals of death and love. I enjoyed all the natural references and surprises you sprinkled throughout this piece. Excellent write, my friend.

Clay