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Read MoreMidwinter’s season on her lips,a thawing blush tranquilizes the senses.The dark of winter’s solsticeleaves me no lips to see to kiss.Those pine-green eyes,dusts of snow feathering upon her blushed cheeks.There they melt,glissading down her face.
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Awww I got Spring blushes now 😊
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Read MoreWhen the sky criesI feel its tearsRollingRolling down my face.Heaven weepsLeaving me in its wake.Can’t you see my tearsMy tears falling for you?The sky it poursCos darlin' we are through!He was my soulNow my soul didn't matter.I had no...
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Crying in the rain was always my safe space. Tears aren’t noticed there
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I agree. It also feels like you’re not crying alone. Thank you Willow
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The rain might our hidden space to cry without being noticed, but, also its washing the sorrow and tears away. May it be a new chapter.
A heartfelt write, Fia! I loved it! “)
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Thank you, M.E ;))
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Beautiful with so much meaning.
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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Rain rain go away
I will wipe your tears away-
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Thank you, Sam;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Felt this one my friend, a phenomenal write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;)
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Thank you, Dragon-Fire;))
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A beautifully bittersweet write. I love a good rain and love a good cry in the rain too. I used “stars cry” in something before, and I like the idea of bringing elements into writing. I bet more await from you too..
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Thank Pandy zipped love the elements and how they mimic emotions
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Read MoreA dying love turns everything gelid bodies frozen solid pain entombed by fleshy permafrost so cold limbs might snap off tears could turn to icicles which frozen tear ducts can't release hateful words leave lips to turn to sleet in the cold air the body,the heart,the mind cannot survive...
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Thanks Indie
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Yes I noticed sometime after I’d posted that Indie had posted something similar.
Clearly, she is a rare talent just like me…. rotflmfao -
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It’s that push pull poison that gets us every time
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian