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Read MoreShe turns her naked back to me.She is not rejecting me.She is inviting me in.She knows it.I know it.We begin the dance.Horizontally, but a dance nonetheless.My fingers stroke her skin and rummage through her tussled hair.They shift to her...
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Touching and being touched is natures way of saying….’ I understand ‘.
Doesn’t always require sex but good sex always requires it.
Thanks Raven for your comment 💋
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Thank you, Raven xoxo
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Agree with Raven. That is one helluva solid landing at the end
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Thank you, Willow xoxo
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Some endings never end, others end before they’ve really begun, but always the questions remain. Well played 🌼
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Thank you, Average Joe xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Fia. You stuck the ending my friend, love the sleight of hand on the last line. Very clever, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian xoxo
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Daniel, I love your stories; you do bring them to life.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling, amazing imagery my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Daniel this is magnificent. My eyes were riveted to the screen as your tale unfolded. A work of dark literary quality that was incredible to read. Truly a publishable story. Knowing this is just a chapter in your book amazes me. Truly fantastic story telling.
John
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Read Morethere came a time when what I had so long denied in truth…deeply buried refusing to acknowledge it (because truth...was more than I could carry)it erupted...and all sound went silent for a frozen moment a vacuum whine slowly building sharp in the back of my mind (and I...
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Terrific write Willow….very very good.🙏
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Thank you, Peter. That means a lot to me
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All I have is a pen, girl, no sword. But what do they say? The pen is mightier than the sword?
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The opening of this with the whispering was perfect. I can feel your words through the music nice melding.
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Thank you, Fia
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Bella. Bravissima! 🌼
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Many thanks!
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! The arrangement worked nicely with the words, whispers well placed, the piano was also a great choice. Amazing work my friend, excellent execution. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This one is actually part of my book, From the Ashes. I always know when I have the music/vocals right when they make me cry. It takes me back to that moment, that feeling when I wrote it. I’ll be putting a number of my healing era pieces up over time. Clearing the pipes, as it were. Thank you, my friend. Your words mean more than I can express
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🙃🖊🗡
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thank you so much. Life’s little stumbles…
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Such eloquent passion and imagery. This definitely moves the imagination and the spirit
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This was the beginning of my evolution. Thank you, my friend
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Read MoreMy heart bleeds bloodas my pen bleeds ink. My heart's the epicenter of my bodyas my pen's the instrument of my soul. Together, blood and ink coexist, a heart and soul mourn together, and my soul I realize, possesses handsto grasp my...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Into the book it belongs! This is flat out a beautiful ink my friend. Excellent. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love this. I’m a great fan of double meanings, work that makes you think deeper than what’s implied on the surface. Awesome!
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And some that only think they can…. What a punch at the end. Nice weekend starter.