The ending ties it all together well. And I agree with the mic drop line.
Regards James

Not a bad way to be. There’s always a bit of magic feeling to what we do.

this is beautiful I am way too arrogant when I write❤

You are full on magic in every way

are you around for awhile? If so can we talk on gmail?

I feel this…I don’t think I really weave my words on my own. I am but a conduit to jot down what comes to me in either a daydream or nightmare.
I really appreciate the brevity in your poetry. You leave us dimensions to visit in a short space of words.
j.

I feel like a child in front of the universe. Thank you for the support. One question do you share on writerscafe.org?

Unfortunately I think this captures the current feeling in the air a little too well.

hello dearest Joe this is powerful my husband and I were thinking of moving to the city and I warned my husband no talks of polictics because I fear in this day and age❤

“Lawfare is the prelude to warfare” It captures how division can eat away at freedom from within. A timely and sobering reflection on what it means to truly live free.

Listen to your feelings. Trust your intuition.

I find this piece mentally challenging in a good way.

Very thoughtful and reflective on the American society

Brutal honesty at its best. x