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Read MoreBrain burn,fire of thought-a little bit ofbroken legion-poems, off...in the mist of faulty wiring from synapse charring, Freedom: that rabid mongrel sawed the wings off gibbering angels, how they touched me: here, here, & especially ...
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This was a fun read. I was told you get more philosophical when smoking. Instead, you get the brain burn. Nice
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Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.
Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
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thank you graciously dearest Jacob ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…
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thank you dearest Benjamin that is beautiful to me ❤️
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Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability
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thank you graciously dearest RPM ❤️
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Benjamin Scraps replied to the topic DUP farewell playlist in the forum Underground Caverns
We all made the deal. Time to live with it. Great time of year of reflect on that fact. Just bury my body down by the highwayside!! Hope everyone is doing great and ready for Autumn!!!
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I feel that you pulled a lot of Greek mythology inspiration here? I could be wrong. I like the piece
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Greco-Roman culture & philosophies, plus some New Testament references. Legionnaires, Roman soldiers with a particular skill at building roads, were not paid in gold but salt, which is where we derive the word ‘salary’. That might be somewhat of an urban legend, but it seems to be at least rooted in truth.
Great eye again, thank you!!
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Thank you;))
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I think many of us feel like machines. We work 9-5 jobs…like factory work, restaurant work…I did both.
Watched the clock…tried to have fun, but machines don’t laugh or cry.
This poem has a sense of rhythm that matches that routine…and the rhyme scheme is subtle but smart.Really enjoyed and felt this read….related from my days before I got lucky and found teaching.
j.
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The layout is perfect for the rhythm to shine here.
Sometimes the thoughts we have turn into fiery poems, and often those thoughts burn up before they get to the page.
WE hope to be able to scrape up some of the embers and still put a piece on the page.
“here, here and especially here.”
j.