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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
Teeth bared
He’s scared
His mind’s a mess
Trying to handle with finesse
But to no avail-this ship has sailed
If it was meant to be-he will return to me-
A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More
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Fia Naturie posted in the group The Art of Poetry
(My poem for the picture)
No meaning
I sit here thinking
Life has little meaning
Once I lived in luxury
Now I live in memory
What is the meaning of my life?
Smoke coming from my pipe has more meaning -
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This is so sad, and the fact that she cheated and gave an STD.It left a gaping wound that would never heal
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Both pieces tight and about being done dirty, and delivering retribution. We love the versatility of the pieces, to wild dude
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Please that we caught the next installment, not as we had originally assumed, thankfully. We thought that there was some deception afoot. We find it human adult females feel one way about making love to virgin men but an adult man will actively seek out a virgin female. We really like this piece Lady and always your model selection matches