Yes ma’am 🫡 haha

A hypnotic journey into delusions and visions of madness. You’ve left me strapped up in a straitjacket.

I could relate to this poem. It’s not “stupid”. We all fall for “fictional” men and women.

I love the way you use repetition in this piece, and the rhyme is really nice. I like the message. Fictional men have no faults, so they are easy to fall for. It reminds me of an old song called Imaginary Lover by Atlanta Rhythm Section.

Brilliantly penned, my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

I feel it could be a lot lengthier.

And thank you 😊

Beautifully penned, Daniel. Can’t fix what ain’t broken my friend. Perfect as is. Appreciate you.

Damian

Also,inspired off Alec Benjamin’s single, “”Water Fountain”.

Beautifully penned. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks Mary… you’re too kind and dare I say sizzling hot😜

And this is how we honor those lost & still keep going. Beautiful & poignant

Lovely piece! Very well written.

Beautifully penned, Peter. Incredible spill my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautiful

Absolutely 💯 beautiful like others have said. I’m sure your friend loved it and very grateful to you.

That was absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing Peter.❤️

There’s a warmth in this that feels like a small flame kept alive. A blessing for the ones we carry.