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Read MoreI'm trying to find my way through this obscuring fog, a thick veil called psychosis. Navigating unmedicated is near impossible. Being off an anti-psychotic itself is insanity! I was off onto this foggy path, a path with an uncertain end. Now, medicated, that dreaded veil lifts, and everything clears, the...
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Read MoreAs my lips pressed into yours,my hand rested on your neck. As my chest pressed into yours,your heartbeat I felt was so profound. As my other hand guided yours to my neck, you felt the blood surging from my head down. As...
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Read MoreHusband : There's only us two home for dinner tonight.Thought you could eat me for entree,I'll eat you for mains and for dessert...I'll leave that up to you. Wife: Sorry , I'm on a diet so will have to skip...
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Cleverly penned, Peter. A very witty write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow! You can never be too prepared, can you? The truth is, sex is really good for headaches.
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I’ve got a headache now…
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Put on the Marvin Gay. I’ll be right over
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Read MoreKafka: I exist in a corridor without doors,where names crumble before they are read.Each face I create dissolves into the mist,like a crime without a defendant, like love without a letter. Marilyn: I exist in the light that never rests,trapped...
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This may be your masterpiece my friend, or perhaps one of many masterpieces in your case. It’s incredible dialogue but their tongues speak poetry, not just casual conversation words. Damn, this was Chef’s Kiss. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for being there my friend. ❤
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The back-and-forth banter is done well. The use of questioning each other I enjoyed.
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Thank you, appreciate you!
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The dialogue was great. Your a talent. Well done my friend.
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Viva Keith… I keep waiting for your comments.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Your writing shines. Excellent as always!
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Thank you, Keith;))
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This is so funny. There is no escape. lol