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Read MoreOn the edge of my waking dreams lain as solitary skeleton under double-duvet shroud, only my mind knows who I groped in the night no room for ghosts or memories of teenage promises, |f you ride the subway m twilight to sun rise make sure...
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Dear R,
Fantastic blend of dreamscape and lively activities. The flirty and suggestive atmosphere throughout is a very hot ticket. I really liked how you worked in all the references of different movies and forms of dancing. For me, I never knew there could be such a level of passion, especially in the written word. Fabulous write. H 🌷
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Fia, thank you.
H. your presence here is a pleasure to the poetry world. I simply genuflect at your kind and caring soul x
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Read MoreI was born from two people who did not know what they created A force to be reckoned with, never to be underestimated. As I walk into the room, all eyes are on me. Smooth like iceNot seeing the fire being set free What they don't...
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fucking shit…. I left for a few weeks now you want me dead… ok im leaving
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Don’t you dare leave.
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Um…duly noted. Definitely destruction incarnate
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Thank you, Willow
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This is rather unsettling knowing the devastation that’s so common these days with active shooters. Very scary.
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I did not want you to feel that way. Going with the prompt I created with Ambyr, He picked creation, and I chose to go with devastation. That encompasses Fire, Water, Ice
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No problem. The poem has a lot of weight to it and a lot of fire in its delivery.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a change of pace my friend, you always prove there is no subject you can’t tame. It’s too close to call, you both delivered amazing writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I needed to stretch and get out of comfort zone
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You nailed this one. No doubt about it. The kind of write that pulls you along in an inexorable tide of power and rhyme. I keep envisioning cement shoes while reading 😁
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Haha well that’s interesting. Thank you Detritus
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Read MoreOh so much time has passed.As children,playing and laying in the grass.Memories like nothing else. With doubts,nonexistant and always false.With time,we grew taller.And we fell even harder. We reached the stars and skies,planets.We achieved the impossible.Now you are nearly 18. You wonder,where...
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Read More“Leading a horse to water won’t make the motherfucka drinkAnd no water on a motherfuckas ass will cause it to eventually stank, “The same if a motherfucka constantly is going up in pussyPersonally she can wash afterwards, but...
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Thank you for the comment on both.
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hello dearest Benny my heart sank at first I thought you were in the icu of the hospital… I’m glad you are alright and keeping your eyes open for treachery 💕
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Good luck with that! LOL.
Cool little ditty, btw.
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Interesting how you go to one time period to the other.