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Read MoreOur flame light has faded to shadow… The last hiss of our candle has come… It's sooty wick now cold and black… That delicate glow once soothed us… Long ago, our rose bloomed amongst ruins… Within the warm breath of the candle… Whose flickering flame...
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Read MoreAmong the rain drops I walkSkin barely soaked while I talk Apparently to no one Alone yet so combined in my thoughtsI choose to believe I’m being mocked Apparently by no one Acid rain for the people walking byFriendly faces warm the hearts...
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I’m so glad you liked it!
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Hoi Drieks,
Love to see you (r work) again.
And about things that are close to my heart.Alle kleine beetjes helpen!
Keep them coming please!
Warm regards, Gus-
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Hey Gus!
As always, thank you for taking time to read, listen and comment!
Groetjes!
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics and the perfect arrangement to accompany it musically. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian!
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Hi Drieks!
Enjoyed the music as always. Had to stop by for a listen:)-
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Thank you for stopping by! I appreciate you a lot Adelphina 🙏🏻
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Love it, to tasty
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This is so beautiful, dear Drieks! The music and the lyrics compliment each other perfectly. I enjoyed it very much!
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Thank you so much for your kind words Sappho!
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Read MoreI'm not crazy,I'm just well spoken.Drank too many different potions.I drank a potion oh so blue. And my face turned a sad hue.It made me feel sadness and despair.But he was always there. Then I went and drank some red.It made...
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Read MoreOnce attached and following her every move, I am now what was mimicking her in life. Now there in the background, merely so, I am now what was… Damaged, hurt, and longing to have her back! I am now what was… Now lingering as...
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Short but quite interesting. it says a lot in a brief amount of space. Quite good, really.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More
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Thank you
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You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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YEAH, ya killed it!
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Seriously, I really like this.