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Read MoreAnd finally, you did the obvious.You cut your nails.You did things so seemingly without meaning. And yet, as you swept away the dustfrom one gesture to the next,you opened a tiny crack.Almost nothing, almost a laughthrough which an ancient wind...
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Thanks 🌻
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Cleverly penned, PAR. Phenomenal write my friend there is always depth and layers to your work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks my brother. 🌻
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Read MoreWhen it snows,we all get tempted.To lay in the thick,white snow.As the sun softly glow and melt it overtime. Maybe if you just give in and lay down.Your frown may turn upside down.Spread your legs and spread your arms. Form a...
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hello dearest poet beautiful rhythm and uplifting ❤️
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Beautifully done.
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Read MoreAs the evening stretches beyond skyscrapers sunset cracks windows and voices, midnight lies as a would-be lover counting her footsteps across Brooklyn Bridge to an anonymous apartment, where she imagines waking to her lipstick on his coffee cup Washing machine skies spin skeins of colour red always bleeds into the blue and JFK...
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Dear R,
The visual and imagined images are outstanding in this piece. For me, there such a sense of coping with life especially at Christmas. You incorporate iconic structures of NY throughout giving this an energetic current running underneath the words from start to finish. I really enjoyed seeing the people, appreciating the buildings and mostly the confessional admission within the piece. Fab write. H🌷
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As someone once sang, it’s been a good year for the roses. Heart upon heart, life below humility, Christmas 2025 once seemed a distance away. It was only true friendship & family who drove my sleigh. Maybe, one day, I will become a poem. Huge Welsh hugs and thanks H. x
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The opening catching one’s imagination as you tell us a story through poetry. I enjoyed this.
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Thank you Fia and many plaudits for your perennial encouragement of writers. Wising you a blessed yuletide.
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Well now, this is quite a large gift for us readers. Definitely weighty but not overdone. It brings so much to light, as you build the “Blade Runner” scenery throughout.
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Never considered the blade runner angle and this is why I always hope to submit on poetry sites. Everyone reads their own perspective. Thank you Mark.
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The original Blade Runner is a fantastic, epic movie. Your write belongs with it, including in value.
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Read MoreMy name is Billy Bedoe, and in the sweltering summer of 1969, I encountered the devil incarnate. Her name was Jolie Wheeler, who was 57 years old at the time, and what we nowadays know as a psychopath. I...
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Cool intro/ Looking forward to you unpacking this suspense thriller some more
Much respect
Naaj
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“Some sentences arrive already wounded” is a powerful line. I really appreciated how you treat silence and density as material, not absence.
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Thank you, dear fellow poet.
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This is beautiful, and it felt peaceful in its write.
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Thanks Fia. It was from the deep of my heart that I wrote it to our fellow poet Styxian. His words made me happy so I got inspired to write some and offer them to him.
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Beautifully penned, PAR. Such a heartfelt tribute to Mark (Styxian) my friend. He’s a class act and a brilliant writer who always takes the time to comment words of praise and positivity to members of this community. Nicely done my brother. You never cease to amaze. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you back my brother-friend.
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A given stone will turn to a polished shine when kept tightly in the palm.
It’s something solid to keep us mindful and kinships and the strength of that.
I am a very down to earth person. I actually do have a few rocks that I picked up from somewhere, because they caught my eye.
I enjoy your writing a great deal, Paulo. It is maturely done, strong in its messages. That is why I bother to join writing sites; to find and read quality material that will inspire me to keep my own motivation going.
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All the best to you, my friend.
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This is as amazing tribute. Mark was touched by this. I remember him calling me and telling me about this write.
I think he forgets how inspiring he is with his writes and comments.
It’s awesome when he gets a reminder!Merry Christmas 🎄!
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Merry Christmas 🎄! Thank you! Mark is really an inspiring poet and I am very happy to have him reading my humble words.
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hello dearest Par this is deep that you take notice of such things tells me how wonderful you are ❤️