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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously for such a lovely and thoughtful comment ❤️
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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
as a child I thought this was catchy now as an adult I feel this in my bones
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Visions_of_Insanity and
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Read More1=Why am I the fool2=When the day ends3=Heartbreak behind a smile4=Spring 5=Emotional turmoil6=He bleeds greed7=The end of a disaster8=The moon 9=The endless night10=Restless11=Musical tyrant12=Vibration13=Touched (write about the feeling of being touched)14=The Day is gone so are you15=Last tear shed16=Emotional Quake17=The Dark...
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thank you lovely Fia some interesting choices ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin. I just want everyone to know that its ok to get a prompt to help .<3
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Some cool choices in there, Fia. A nice idea my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. ;))
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Read MoreI'm so sick and tired of hearing youSo much that I don't know what to doI don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smartI could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart You think you're clever, funny, and kindPeople like you...
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Well hell you were feeling upset with this one and you let them have it. Strong piece, like it
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Thanks Fia.
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I admire your anger throughout this piece.
I bet this was an emotional release for you. A well needed one.
I enjoyed the strong use of rhymes, it added to the poetic flow.
A Solid and captivating read. x
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Thank you. Appreciate the feedback.
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you sound like an instrument of destruction here dearest Keith I love it ❤️
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Hello Brenda. Thanks for the kind words. xox
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend this is vintage you in your element here! You’ve been missed brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Peace to you!
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I’ve never tried to trace back how long ago withes emanated from the past. This poem shows the power that one can have when it comes to lust. Something as old as time itself.
Nice one Crimsin, with great picture that conjures up the mystique of the poem.