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    channeled

    echo need channeling through the cosmosthere is an understanding, not that of eartha dark place I once wasthey look into my thoughtsand wait to see how I will respondtracing thoughts through the galaxiesback to my originsa civilization of great...

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    intimate moments

    I'm dreaming today, floating through the daydiscovery in a smileyou conveyed your beauty to meand I can't stop myself, I feel the eurphoria of the momentsecrecy in an intimate thoughtI'm not sure you meant to tell mesexy man your...

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    All I'm Asking

    Another spirt in a quagmire Selling off dignity just to get by Inflated egos that conspire Adding layers to a perpetual lie   Sycophants always fall in line Empty vessels lacking a spine   This world so full of sorrow Throwing obstacles in the way All I’m asking of...

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    • It is a bit musical. I wish for a better day, each and every day. That deer lost in headlights is so true

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A lot of us do wish for better days, that’s for sure. It has a musical feel is on point, it pretty much demanded to be that way, I just followed along for the ride. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • I agree.

      Thank you for putting it into words so eloquently.

    • Got my foot tapping away from the off to the end and back again .. Nice one too sir . Neville

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does have a bit of a rhythm. Thank you for your continued support kind sir. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • I like how this feels angry and tenderly thought at the same time. I like that hopefulness in the dark

    • Damian the fire in the eyes of those zealous followers of the pied piper elevated to guru status is painted in your poem with fire and smoke. Truly a smoking great poem that is as strong emotionally as it is rhythmically. You have real talent my friend.

      John

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really loved the way you described the write in your eyes my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I don’t think I’ve seen subterfuge used in poetry before and you made it fit and feel perfect.
      I think many of us are feeling the same way, especially with the way the world is going.
      Excellent write sir.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like using odd words or hardly used words from time to time. When I can make them fit of course. lol. The world is very fragile at the moment. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    dew

    tracing my steps in smokejust a whisp of airthat rises as incensedivine in naturebut humanly flaweddesecrated holiness, drawn to what I ought not disturbcrimson spice it is lustperfume to my lovers nosea heady fragrance, to arouse him withinsensuality in...

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    • Incredible! It’s like she doesn’t want to desecrate her sacred holiness even though it begs her to give in to human desires and lust so she transforms back into smoke. Really incredible poem and picture, Crimsin.

      • hello dearest Tim lust can be all consuming…the soul moveable but untouchable like smoke… I love you review thank you graciously ❤️

    • Nice! Enticing and not tacky at all. This is pure poetry, Crims. You did a great job with it. And what a pleasure to read it.

    • Passionately penned, Brenda. An amazing write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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