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Robert Stack & Unsolved Mysteries is one of my all time favorite shows. I have a DVD box set of U.M. Thanks Damian for the read & comments.
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I have Robert Stack on my GPS giving me directions. It reminds me of “Airplane”. I’m kidding.
You have just blown my mind with this piece, and there’s nothing insane about it. For once, it’s a vision of sanity, and I think everyone is on board with the beauty of forgiveness. It’s odd how death and finality have a way of changing our perspectives so abruptly. Setting things right can be so important. How fortunate were these two for having a middleman that kept them in touch.
Keith is it? I’m Meg. Thanks for that story!
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Airplane rules!! Every now & then I’ll write something tender. I don’t want all of you to think i’m some raging lunatic. I just write whatever comes to mind.
Absolutely right. Let’s not wait until someone is dying to make amends. Be kind and humble to one another.
Thanks Meg.xo
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Hello Adira. Glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for the gracious comments.
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This was touching. Made me think of my last visit to my mother who was on hospice with breast cancer. She was barely able to open her eyes to see me, then she was able to make a smile, the last smile I ever saw from her. Cancer took her but couldn’t kill her sweet soul. Bravo 👏
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Hi Daniel. Thanks for sharing your story. Sorry to hear about your mom. Life is fragile. Make the best with your loved ones before we all depart. Thanks for the comments.
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Powerful and poignant.
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Thank you my friend.
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Death brings either the sweetest or the meanest in human beings. In this case, it was love. A heartbreaking and heartwarming write. Both at the same time. Well done, buddy!
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Thank you for the kind words M.E. Glad you enjoyed this piece.
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Read MoreHe goes to the same job everyday.He comes home to his wife every night.They rarely touch each other.Only on special occasions, like birthday's and July 4th.There not attracted to each other anymore.They don't make a fuss about it.A few...
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Happens more than most would think. Powerfully penned, Keith. Great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
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Thank you Adira. Reality is painful for most. Appreciate the feedback!
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Can actually relate to this. Sadly. I feel my fiance and I no longer really love each other, not even any attraction exists. While I was reading your piece here, I felt my creative, poetic juices flowing and if I dont have any more purpose with her, then poetry and story writing will become my purpose in life. You write a simple piece, yet totally thought provoking. Bravo!
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Thanks man. I keep my writing simple, always. Many relationships go sour. It’s a very difficult thing to stay loyal and happy with that one person for the rest of your life. Stay creative Daniel. Wish you the best with your relationship.
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Read MoreAbout 15 years ago I was watching the local news. One of the main stories was of a young man aged 20 being murdered. Not by a criminal, or his friends, but by the police.The boy who had mental...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This is a sad one my friend. Pulls at these old heartstrings. Unfortunately, you’re completely right this happens far too often. 9 shots 5 cops. Somebody shot more than once. Powerful message brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It does. Many thanks for being the brave soul to read and comment.
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Read MoreAre you ready to be openly claimed It is not the same It’s your choice, but it’s not a game You’ll wear my symbol You’re lucky I won't brand you Well, there is a branding But that’s between us two You want to think about it Go...
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What if the magic turned against the magician?
Just wondering. “)-
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I have the right spell to make things go as planned. 😉
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Wicked write Fia. Nice work.
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god damn
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Such pretty words. But pray to me, tonight I hold the power. Thank you;))
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Thank you, Keith xoxo you want to be saved or eaten. lol
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Eat me from the inside out.
I will not cry I will not shout.
I’ll be yours for evermore.
You will not have to lock the door.-
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I am leaning towards your delicious plea. I never lock the door. I’m a slight exhibitionist. Thank you, Peter.
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Your hot?? Come here and unbutton…. Thank you Will;))
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I never just stop at the buttons, Will (wink)
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Damn, Fia. Into the book it belongs! My mind kept thinking about “Darling Nikki” by Prince. Seductively penned my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Reminded you of a Prince song. Cool. Thanks Damian;))
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Anyone would be lucky to be claimed by you, poetess. It’s not just words without meaning here. Bravo as always, Fia.
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You are correct, Daniel 😊
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Powerfully penned, Keith. What Mary said, sometimes making things right is comforting. Especially on a deathbed. For some reason when I read this I could hear, Robert Stack, narrating it. Like an Unsolved Mysteries episode. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian