It’s all in the details. The little nuances that leans elegantly one direction or the other. This one takes me places

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. It’s the minute details isn’t it? Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

This is a very reflective piece.

I can sense a lot of careful concentration from the writer.

I admire the determination throughout the stanzas.

This is a dark but incredible read. x

That beginning gives life to this poem even though you bring attention to death. I like the turn in position

Thank you Fia, for reading and commenting.

Simple…but so emotional. Good one, Fia.

A wonderful piece of poetry Fia. This one hits home, literally.

Yeah…so much said in this. My daughter talks of not belonging anywhere. She’s not Mexican enough for that side of her genealogy and not white enough for the other. Never accepted in either. This cataloging of labels in a stolen land is mind boggling and saddening to me

Powerfully penned, Fia. This excellent write tells it like it is my friend. Amazingly done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian