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Read MoreCandles possess souls that flicker against the icy winds of a wintry life. Candles in the snow… Beneath the pale shroud… Candles glowing in the darkness. Their breaths of heaven melt the snow into the holy water I cross myself with.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Secret Ride (magic of Poetic Voice)
He came at night,
On a wind of heat.
A bead of sweat,
On lips so sweet.
“Come with me”
He whispered close.
They are all asleep,
Said, my sexy host.
I crawled out of bed.
On crumpled sheets.
A teddy that cling,
To my heat.
Just be quiet.
It will be fun.
No one will know,
Not even one.
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Thank you 😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
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Thank you Damian
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Read More𝓓𝓸 𝔂𝓸𝓾 𝓼𝓮𝓮 𝓽𝓱𝓮 𝓭𝓾𝓼𝓽 𝓶𝓸𝓽𝓮𝓼 𝓭𝓪𝓷𝓬𝓲𝓷𝓰? 𝓔𝓪𝓬𝓱 𝓲𝓼 𝓪 𝓼𝓸𝓾𝓵—𝓪 𝓯𝓵𝓮𝓮𝓽𝓲𝓷𝓰 𝓼𝓹𝓪𝓻𝓴𝓑𝓸𝓻𝓷 𝓸𝓯 𝓵𝓲𝓰𝓱𝓽, 𝓪 𝔀𝓪𝓵𝓽𝔃 𝓮𝓹𝓱𝓮𝓶𝓮𝓻𝓪𝓵 𝓘𝓲𝓷 𝓽𝓱𝓮 𝓺𝓾𝓲𝓮𝓽 𝓪𝓲𝓻 𝓸𝓯 𝓪 𝓼𝓲𝓵𝓮𝓷𝓽 𝓻𝓸𝓸𝓶.
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Read MoreAmongst the silver drops of rainI heard the silent water hissInvited with a hazy holdAnd a pull of a longing kiss. Wrinkled layers she then removedHeavy onto the floor they landKneeling down onto her two kneesMy pole she squeezed in...
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Well…well. what kind of shower is this?
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the kind you go out dirtier then you come into
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Omg. Love it
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Oh my…..gives a whole new meaning to a ‘shower head’.
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Thanks Peter… every shower should have a head
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Pluming?! I didn’t know this is what they call that … live and learn
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Read MoreMy body is a sunken mausoleum. Within is a ghostly spirit who's restless. Sunken as my once youthful plump cheeks. Within is a reticent tongue that lashes no more. Youthful blushes replaced by the cold purple of twilight. The twilight...
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Life has taken all the youth from you. Sad piece. But done well
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This is a touching dark and sad, but as always beautifully written piece, dear Daniel!
To me, wrinkles are first of all a sign of a life that has been lived. Shared joy and enthusiasm, and the hardships which came with new opportunities to grow, as well.-
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As always, vielen dank! I’m still young but I feel sad and alone. Writing is my only way to vent now.
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Ahhh, Fia
I so love and enjoy the fun of how you’ve used your amazingly gifted poetic voice to blend the vibrant colors, hues, and textures of your deliciously delightful diction to paint word pictures into our joy-filled imaginations, in such ways it all comes to life.
Your short lines build a quick cadence, and with spot-on line-bnreaks, r…Read More