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Read MoreYour time has come young personmuch sooner than you thoughtrelease your mouth from your mother's nipplethere's a lesson here to be taught you seek instant gratificationand vain internet validation I'm a forward thinking manyes, a problem solvercan you put your phone...
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I did. That’s for another day. Thanks man. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreThe cuckold generationtide-pod guzzling snowflakesbegging to be micro-chippedbegging to be numbered Xenophobic and neuroticdisconnected and psychoticreprogrammed and roboticGeneration Zero seeking- individual identitytrapped- in a surrogate reality no social skillsno common sense Easily offendedlooking to accusebegging for defensefrom genuine experiencestampede of the sheepmarch to...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Damn, this is brutally honest my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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These generations that came after us, are self absorbed in their own illusions. To much technology. It is brutally honest. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More
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Thank you
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You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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YEAH, ya killed it!
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Read MoreInto the storm I go again. Lit by flashes of lightning, yet the sun peeks from behind towering thunder clouds to warm my face in this blitz.
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Read MoreThis shroud of nighttime burns from the flame of my candle. Shadows tiptoe away, the night recedes like a black ocean. Quivering, shadow and light dance, an endless dance.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. At least your balanced my friend, if I remember right you even went after your own generation in a write you posted on DUP. lol. No one is safe from your wrath. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian