Quite often even the dark and distasteful thoughts must be laid bear. Maybe we’re under the impression no one cares, but people do relate. This is dark and disturbing. But life is too sometimes.

Powerfully penned, thoughtsdie. Amazing write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hi
I see you write with heart, the art work that reveals your writing. You are multiple talented. I see in everything I do does it is really useful for me in my life frankly speaking does it make my bread. I only have a suggestion write more of positive themes, we never know our poem and pic monetise to a million dollar value. Keep writing.

If you can inspire 10 people it’s equivalent to 10 times, because each one spreads to another 10 people.

Take my review as constructive feedback. Even though we are suffering with negative people around if we turn that into positive themes then our strength builds. Your tears must strengthen you, you must cry for best things, if we feel sad because people are hurting us then your strength diminishes, instead you come out from that and do better your energized double times.

Jessy Jacob ❤️

definitely more… crap… this touched me more than you think

I love it when you skip the conventional, and just flow like spilt honey all over the page, Fia – encore! x

Great use of words and rhymes. Awesome job here.

A sensual poem, written with the precision of a master key. Or should I say: Mistress key!

Passionately penned, Fia. A very seductive write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Oh damn! That’s some fierce wordplay there! You built that to perfection!