Hello Lizz. This is some really good horror. Nicely executed.

This was really steamy! The long build-up and then the action. Then inevitably surrendering yourself to him. Sexy!

D.

Very powerful and arousing.
Hope your man reads it!

Seductive and raw. Great details and hot as fuck! XXX

This beats poems about cats any day. 🙂 Very hot and steamy, Lizz.

Wow.. what a sensually explicative poem! Well done!!

Thanks 😊

I like where this went. Organized religion is a tightrope and shouldn’t be that way. God is within us. Great writing.

Excellent writing Lizz.

I prefer Buddhism myself

Yes. This struggle is internal, not external. Christianity as a kind of perversion of Gnosticism, I’ve encountered this concept more times than I can count ever since I put my tin foil hat on. There is a flavor of that here (Christ as a “spark”….the divine spark) and that caught my eye. Many of us conspiracy kooks have been saying it for years now that the “Anti-Christ” is not a person but the system we’ve been living in (aka “The Beast System”), and I like that you have included that idea here as well. (“It’s the system that blocks what you’ve always seen.”) The main idea behind it is that this place is a people farm, and our energy is being harvested.

Religion has never been a help for me, but Gnostic lore is pretty fire. One thing that IS a more concrete form of guidance on this earthly plane is Stoicism. Practical. Useful. Very real. Ideas that you can actually apply to life. We may need it now more than ever, dealing with them crazy ol’ Archons and their narcissistic idiot Demiurge (the god of the Old Testament)