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Read MoreLeper town found on greed and disgustfor a hundred yearsbroken deal, a false beacon of trustplundered, golden fearstoday is centennial day!time to celebratecursed, are the founders at bayso let the fog, decide their fate the fog - appears - over...
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Thanks Fia.
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I have always seen fog as a kind of veil, wrapped around secrets and mysteries. Now I know that it can also be a good hiding place for evil spirits. My confidence is shattered. 😉 the repetition of out of the Fog! is masterfully spooky!
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I live near the bay and my neighborhood is one of the 1st areas to witness the fog rolling in. It’s quite eerie and intriguing. This is a classic film. Check it out when you have some time. Thanks Elke. xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Anything John Carpenter put his name on is a classic. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I agree with you. Thanks my friend
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Read MoreViolence he has awakened intoHarsh murdering transpiresEnticement of the fleshWhores scalped for pleasureChaotic mind, fully dementedTerror on other's, unrelentlessObsessed by crueltyMisogynistic hatred, slaughter Shotgun blows the head clean offMayhem & lunacyAlways looking, on the huntNight stalking fresh prey You were warned...
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Never seen this one. Why do they go out when they tell them not to? lol
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No one listens to authority figures. Plus, if they listened there would be no movie. Thanks Fia.
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very darkly delightful ❤️
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Thank you Brenda. xo
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man.
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Read Morewith confusing dark my artistry comes forthto wrap around and conjure you forthmy fate dealt I think to take you with me assaulted desire weepsin the salty rain reapthe lovely flowers of the field grin for the sake of heavenwho is...
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Thank you for allowing my ink to splatter, Brenda. I don’t know why we don’t team-up more often. My dirge is available even in the throes of my tuna casserole.
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hello dearest Adagio it’s always a pleasure to write with you and we will do more collaborations I’m sure I’m really pleased how this one came out thank you ❤️
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This is good. The flow is nicely done. Nice job to both of you.
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hello lovely Fia good evening thank you graciously from us both ❤️
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Thank you so much! It means the world to me. Truly. 💕
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Very cool! Hey we like you via your writes! You have a lot going on in your head, so therefore you are not boring right? LOL
I like how you search for what works for you, creativity wise. It reads well as a poem, and then the boom as a song.
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Thank you for your kind words Styxian! It means a lot to me.
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Truly enjoyed the read then when I reached the bottom and pushed play, it completely elevates your write. Honestly, I enjoy reading first and thinking about how it will sound when I push play
at the bottom. It’s like the music aspect is desert after the meal/read lol
Hope that makes sense.
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Thank you so much Adelphina! It does make sense yes! I really appreciate you 🙏🏻
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hello dearest Drieks we need hope and no one likes me don’t feel bad…it doesn’t matter what circle I’m in I don’t fit one on one I do great in groups not at all… ps I like you I just have failed to comment much of late… this write you should be proud of ❤️
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Such kind words Crimsin 🙏🏻 this means the world to me. Thank you ❤️
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“I’m the echo in a room that never speaks
Nobody likes me
Because there’s nobody like me
I’m the secret even silence couldn’t keep.”Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics per usual my friend. That chorus above, next level wordplay! Once again your arrangement highlights your words. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That means a lot coming from you Damian 🙏🏻 Thank you!
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Oh, my god this is so good! I just played this so my wife could hear you again (and me) and it is just phenomenal! And what an incredible voice! Give her some love, girl. Plus the music and arrangement, everything is top notch!
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Read MoreSometimes I can't help but wonder.How do you immortalize love?Maybe by the memories we had together wander. Or trying harder for one another.Perhaps you need to write and sing a ballad.Perhaps a love song,one with thoughtful lyrics. And beat that's very...
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Favorite stanza,
“Instead finds new beginnings and ways.
Maybe the love we have is represented by a sun.
And a moon that looks down at it fondly”
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That bit was inspired by the person this poem was inspired by!
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Don’t forget the scratching of the initials upon a tree trunk!
Wonderful write with plenty of motivating lines so the reader can ponder your message.
Well done.
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Yes, that was a good movie too. Their fates were sealed.