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For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.
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Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.
Damian
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NAVINA posted in the group National Poetry Month
A RED INVITATION
I love the way it feels
When no one sees
These miserable hills
A dark sky… hidden in black seasCan you see where I am? (Where I am?)
This place understands….
It knows my story… how it began…
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This tells the reader what you mean but with finesse. Love it