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Read More“When it rains it pours on cheating ass whoresThat’s why behind closed doors, I’m fucking yours, “So-so deep in her wanting pussy I drillCausing you to catch an uncomfortable chill, “In his heart he hates it, but...
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It’s usually like that, because when a motherfucka deep in the sexual thrills of cheating. The last thing they are thinking about is the other person, especially when that strong nut begins to flow.
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Cheating is a pleasurable reality with dirty consequences if caught.
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Read MoreCruel intentions sit behind blue eyes Nothing normal about feeling this way Crawling on paper skin bruised by lies Darkness waits to seize a summer day Sleepless nights filled with frustration Claustrophobic words shallow and thin Filtering through arrogant conversation Naked praise wears this suspicious grin Verbal...
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The last 2 lines are perfect for this. Nicely done
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad they work, they’re starting to grow on me. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damn…you always take me somewhere with your poetry. This one is no exception. Give those last 2 lines their just dues. They’re fantastic, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m all about taking journeys, and inviting others to tag along. I’m glad they work, it took effort to get them to flow right. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Raven. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’ve gotta give yourself more credit, Damian.
The last lines indeed suppressed my own voracious appetite. The last stanza is my favorite.
Nice spill my friend. xx
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P.G. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Nice, to see you again. I was pretty confident till the end. lol. It took me awhile to get the flow right, I had went through so many ideas that were cool but wasn’t working right. So though these lines worked I wasn’t sure, but from all the support in the comments, I chose wisely. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s razor-sharp and sinuous—like a poem with fangs. The alliteration of “verbal viper” and “voracious appetite” creates a rhythmic coil of menace and desire, as if the speaker’s confronting a charmer who cloaks cunning beneath sweetness. The image of truth dangling just out of reach—“suspending the obvious”—gives this a wicked elegance.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. The words you used to describe this piece in your eyes was amazing, brother. That means so much to me, thank you so much. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Your writing has only improved with time, Damian. Your struggle with the ending paid off in a victorious way.
Great poem/
And ty for your comments, they’re much appreciated.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad you think that, brother. It really means a lot to me. Good to see you back, not a problem, big fan of your work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More“In pussy I may have lucked-upBut in the end my life became fucked-up, “Maybe at many of those moments I should have had my nineFire in the hole, now a bitch could have had a real hot time, ...
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I appreciate this. There is a lot of truth in this poem many have or are going thru everyday.
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I understand completely
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Read MoreSo much pain sent within a shockwave Voices turn silent when riddled with fear Wearing a face that only appears brave Underneath it stirs a torment more severe Out in the ether the air has grown dense Seems the grass is dead on the...
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Im reminded of the old adage…if it seems too good to be true, it probably is. Goes right back to your other poem…gotta read the fine print. Believe the lies, trust the cardboard cut out caricature, you get what you deserve. Hitting nails on the head with a jack-hammer, as usual, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true, all the old adages and wives tales are quite accurate. You know me. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian karma always has her way well said I am depressed it feels heavy this poem great write 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“Been swindled under some false pretense”, def felt that line.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite lines as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“grass is dead on the other side”. The older I get the more I feel that. Great ink.
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I was just about to quote that as well. So powerful!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite lines as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s one of my favorite lines as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I read and reread your poem. Took me into the heart of chasing rainbows and the stark reality that often is at the other side. Superbly crafted poem.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That hits with a quiet force—like courage stitched from trembling threads. The contrast between silence and the mask of bravery unveils a moment of deep vulnerability, almost like a portrait of someone holding themselves together just enough to get by. It carries the weight of all the things left unsaid when fear takes the reins.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Wow, you are so spot on with your commentary. Nice job catching all that, brother. I know I can jam a lot of things into a write. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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When I with you I am always her desired sexual moment. Really good line.
Nice piece