Zombie’s eating you alive is the worst way to die in my opinion. Nice piece Keith

Powerfully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Walking Dead and nuclear war in such a short piece…impressive!

And that hard work put in.

Dazed over eyes, lovely visual.
Favorite line
“The court of hard dick and swole nuts will be my representative

Because the deportation of cum in her pussy is all that I have to give,

Have to make it smooth and nasty at the same time.

I guess we all have our interpretations. I see a line of young people heading into a club or hanging out outside it to hear hip hop or rap. Many may disagree, but I see that kind of music as negative and detrimental. Just my two cents.

Tremendous flow here, my friend.

hello dearest Damian either they don’t read the situations or they are goading up to reveal what we know… through manipulation of a situation…they get me all the time this is one of your best in my opinion 💕

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved those lines as well, you’re right there is no such thing as a safe place in the world’s current state. Happy to read your commentary again, hope your music projects are going well. Appreciate you.

Damian

“While destruction lies around the bend”

It’s interesting how the word lies changes the entire tone when read as one definition over the other. This is such a cleverly written piece. And powerful, as you excel at, my friend

Fanfuckingtastic Damian. Powerful and packs a tremendous punch!

I kinda get an image of friends drifting apart maybe due to political differences.

Great ink, friend

I can feel the anger in this piece. You cannot escape the hell you create.

What an interesting carnival that the ticket dissolves within an hour. Like it is hiding any evidence that it was ever there. Nice