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Read MoreShe has a problemShe worships drugsShe has a boyfriend who is a dealer & userShe just recently gave birth to a baby girlThey live in this crack house that you wouldn't send your worst enemy to live inFilth, roaches,...
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It is sad. Thank you Brenda. xo
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, unfortunately the daily truths of this world are quite evil. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sad but true Damian. Thanks my friend.
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People who deal and push the drugs are the demons. The innocents are always the one that suffers.
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Oh so true Fia. Appreciate the comments.
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Read MoreShe hated violence and sexShe believed to much of it was ruining our youthShe made sure her two sons aged 11 & 14 weren't exposed to this smut anywhere in lifeShe has a drinking problemOften, she would monitor their...
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I just read a story about a mother like this and the kid killed his mother and a sibling I think he was driven to it… you can’t shelter them that much and expect they would be okay… too bad the boys died great write ❤️
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Thank you Brenda. Too many sickos out there. Appreciate it!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Pricks live forever. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HA! Yes. Pricks do live forever! Thanks man.
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There are only so many things we can shelter our kids from. And even then, it doesn’t last forever. Still didn’t see this one coming….you always keep my on my toes my dear friend. xx
~P.G💋
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Absolutely correct. This women was out of her mind. A true nut job. Thanks PG xo
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Read MoreI’m not weak. And to be honest, I’m not strong either.. I’m the perfect balance of both; I’d bet that you are neither. Your weakness of the flesh, with your emotions suppressed, drowning in temptation, but oh sweet baby, I’ve not tempted you yet. I’m resistant to...
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Keep on, keepin’ on. It’s great!
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Thank you xx
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The flow is perfect and I the defiance at the end fits this poem so well. I like it.
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Defiance is one of my strong suits. Thank you, dearest Fia. xx
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Well phrased battle of wills 🌼
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I appreciate it. xx
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Great flow and a very smart human, to tight
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I thank you dear. xx
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Great write PG.
Those that yield to temptation fail to see the price they have to pay and often become addicted to choice of drug…. booze,food,gambling ,porn,sex,excersise etc.To yield occasionally is being human…💋
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Absolutely Peter, you get it. The price is too high, and I am too cheap. 😉 Thanks for reading. xx
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I agree with Fia, “defiance” suits this poem well. Not to mention the flow of this piece!
Daniel
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Daniel, thank you. Wasn’t there a saying about defiant girls? Or does my memory fail me? lol xx
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Phenomenal piece. Nicely said and executed!
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Keith, you are always appreciated my dear friend. Thank you for reading. xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend, I always love the layers in your writes. Always something bubbling underneath the surface. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dearest Damian, I have to keep things exciting. Thank you for reading, it’s always a pleasure. xx
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Read MoreLost moments these gaps in time Surrounded by such strange faces Unable to reason can’t find a rhyme Empty thoughts in random places Can’t recall when the mask slipped Sometimes minutes feel like years Somehow the scale must of tipped Got this constant ringing in my...
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Amnesia, would be a lonely thing for a poet of the forgotten. This was exquisite, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hello dearest Damian great write I feel this I often wonder if forgetting is a blessing or a curse ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Maybe a little of both depending on what’s forgotten. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous work, my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, this is strong tonic. I could feel this in my bones as I read. This i the stuff of poetry that feels like strong whiskey on the tongue. Sad but great writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is sad indeed. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It is cruel when the mind slips and cannot grasp what you have lost. Food for thought.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is food for thought, these are the little things I think about late at night. lol. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Older age? I know all too well the fading of a few things within myself!
Yet you haven’t lost your literary touch! You are blessed with talent, that hasn’t ebbed. Thankfully we write down our material, no need to remember them from scratch! LOL.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Getting old isn’t without the fear of losing one’s self along the way. I’m just trying to hang in there. You’re much too kind, Dear Sir. But thank you for your continued support brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Exquisite piece Damian. Well written my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, brother.
Damian
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exceptional read! full of concise, vividly profound imagery…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, C. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As you so often do, you stirred levels here again. I read this from the personal perspective of memories slipping. A sense of self lost in blips of time. I also see this as the world arena and how people have lost their sense humanity, their compassion, their community. Like the whole damn world has global amnesia. And I read it as literal amnesia from losing time in the form of blanks in memory from drink or drugs. Many layers, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well you know me, I love when there are multiple meanings and endless possibilities. lol. Sometime’s I think it’s probably little pieces of all those things rolled into one. I follow where my muse leads me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I hate this world sometimes sad truth dearest Keith ❤️