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Read MoreICannon upon canon of societal demandsTaking a stand to reconfigure the figureRecompute figures, formations, calculationsReexamine the mazes of examinationsWhere we became ions, spied-electrifiedSometimes sunshine secretes secrets of shadowsHappily an anomaly - As happy as singing sparrowsThe best thing that...
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This is beautiful, Cipher. The bookmark will be working later today and you’ll be in it.;))
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Thank you Fia and Willow…
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Beautifully penned, Cipher. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian..!
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Read MoreHere we are at the nighmare paradeafter hours you hear cries in the nightthe shadows fall as you witness ghosts of the midwayliving dolls steal your soulyou dare to ride the haunted carousel?calliope plays mysteriously in the foregroundthe circus...
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Damn, the last line is like a lid slamming down on a coffin after the rest of the poem. Actually a very valid reminder in this world
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Thanks Willow. Appreciate the kind words.
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Wow, this is a wild ride you have taken us on with your poem! Your socially critical observation of this world is brilliantly penned and enjoyable sarcastic!
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Always sarcasm Sappho. Good to see you here.
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Oof! What a haunting vision you’ve painted us with mere words, Vision.
I LOVE IT! xx
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Hello P.G Thanks for the kind words and feedback.
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Always a pleasure dear. xx
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Thanks Adira. Great to hear from you.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This one has grit, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the comments Damian. Thanks!!
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Read MoreOne day a dog bit the index finger of his masterthe dog ran off with a bloody finger,before the master could catch him the dog came to a river and went onto a wooden dockthe dog looked down into the...
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Phenomenal write, Keith. I should think he would learn from his mistake, and keep the dog fed. Great story my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You would think, but he didn’t. Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreNo matter the vibe it’s only temporary Eventually there's no place left to run From birth all the way to the cemetery Burden turns heavy guilt weighs a ton Everybody’s hiding a skeleton or two Sooner or later the punishment’s due Tried to drown the...
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Don’t count the minutes…..count the breaths.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Exactly. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damn, I can completely feel how it all seems like it can just slip right through your fingers…Time waits for no one and can be brutal with its incessantness, indeed
You created a universal understanding within your ink that most people can wholly identify with, especially once you’ve reached a certain age…
Wonderfully crafted – ty for sharing
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, B. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed, it waits for no one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Your poetry always makes the reader think. This one is no exception. Nice work Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well I do try. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sigh…it takes us where it takes us. Regardless where you were going it took me to this…honor the memories, live in the moment. Ain’t nobody perfect. We’ve all got our demons. And they live where we can’t outrun them. There’s a lot in this one that speaks to different thoughts for me. Gonna be pondering this one for a while, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Ain’t that the truth, you always seem to hit the nail on the head. Always like to make folks ponder, it happens to me often as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on from another angle I was looking at as well. You’re so very welcome, and thank you. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Has a bit of eeriness and regret like “The Raven”. Wonderful ink.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s an honor to even be mentioned in the same area code as, Mr. Poe. Appreciate you.
Damian
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” Still repairing mistakes already made
Can’t hide past demons in the shade ”
Man, that hit home!!!
this whole vibe is a mood provoker.Great writing.
Naaj
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved those lines as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I wish I could put this on a reading list. I have yet to get the bookmark to work. Beautifully brilliant, this is