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Read MoreSummer is gone, I’m afraid.And so are the remnants of you. That part isn’t such a loss though,because you broke my heart in two. How I long for the days of normalcy..And just maybe I can get back to thatNow that...
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You’re too kind, Damian.
xx
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Ouch…… someone done you wrong.
Good write and after summer comes autumn,winter and spring….don’t be duped when a new summer arrives.
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Fool me once, shame on you 😏
Thank you Peter❤️
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I like to think so too ☺️ as always Adira, I appreciate your kind words.
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Yes, this summer is new you and your strength cannot be denied. Love this piece you put out.
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Next time around it’s your turn to retaliate. Take names and kick ass! Amazing poetry PG.
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Read MoreIt would seem that we have a situation, and I don’t know what I look forward to more.. You helping me out, or me helping you out, or a little self-gratification? Such delicious temptation… I will take it anyway that I can get it.. It starts with...
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Adira, thank you!! It’s been a while… lol
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Wicked trilogy. Yes;)) this is hot
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Fia sincere thanks.. glad you enjoyed :))
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~P.G💋
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These lines sparked flames in here. Take it easy. You are going to burn the whole site down.
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M.E, how else shall I leave my mark? 😈
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Passionately penned, P.G. You’re still bringing the heat my friend, always dig the layers in your writes. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Foreplay can never be over-rated. It’s the starting of a fire between two lovers as they swim through time enjoying each other to the fullest. As the song goes – Nice and easy does it every time…that is…until it gets hot and heavy. 🙂
Good writing…hot and seductive.
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Read More“When it rains it pours on cheating ass whoresThat’s why behind closed doors, I’m fucking yours, “So-so deep in her wanting pussy I drillCausing you to catch an uncomfortable chill, “In his heart he hates it, but...
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When I with you I am always her desired sexual moment. Really good line.
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It’s usually like that, because when a motherfucka deep in the sexual thrills of cheating. The last thing they are thinking about is the other person, especially when that strong nut begins to flow.
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Cheating is a pleasurable reality with dirty consequences if caught.
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreCruel intentions sit behind blue eyes Nothing normal about feeling this way Crawling on paper skin bruised by lies Darkness waits to seize a summer day Sleepless nights filled with frustration Claustrophobic words shallow and thin Filtering through arrogant conversation Naked praise wears this suspicious grin Verbal...
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The last 2 lines are perfect for this. Nicely done
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad they work, they’re starting to grow on me. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damn…you always take me somewhere with your poetry. This one is no exception. Give those last 2 lines their just dues. They’re fantastic, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m all about taking journeys, and inviting others to tag along. I’m glad they work, it took effort to get them to flow right. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Raven. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’ve gotta give yourself more credit, Damian.
The last lines indeed suppressed my own voracious appetite. The last stanza is my favorite.
Nice spill my friend. xx
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P.G. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Nice, to see you again. I was pretty confident till the end. lol. It took me awhile to get the flow right, I had went through so many ideas that were cool but wasn’t working right. So though these lines worked I wasn’t sure, but from all the support in the comments, I chose wisely. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s razor-sharp and sinuous—like a poem with fangs. The alliteration of “verbal viper” and “voracious appetite” creates a rhythmic coil of menace and desire, as if the speaker’s confronting a charmer who cloaks cunning beneath sweetness. The image of truth dangling just out of reach—“suspending the obvious”—gives this a wicked elegance.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. The words you used to describe this piece in your eyes was amazing, brother. That means so much to me, thank you so much. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Your writing has only improved with time, Damian. Your struggle with the ending paid off in a victorious way.
Great poem/
And ty for your comments, they’re much appreciated.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad you think that, brother. It really means a lot to me. Good to see you back, not a problem, big fan of your work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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