Wow we never questioned them we tasted greed and we never questioned them. That is powerful statement. Felt it

Thank you..yeah we stop pushing back because they dangle a carrot in front of us..they say a few food sounding lies and we are like ok..well I benefit.. thinking selfishly short term instead of long term..and in turn we give them more power and we lose ours

Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. This is excellent work my friend, amazing write. I concur. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you..sometimes the mirror reflects more than just our reflection..they show our true soul..something haunting and beautiful at the same time..thank you for the comment

Phenomenally penned, Mstrmnd. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with precise detail and an amazing flow. Dare I say it’s very lyrical my friend. Dig this. Appreciate you.

Damian

Death?
I like this. I keep trying to work out the riddle as I read. There are some things we can never understand.
Kind regards
james

Brilliant 👍

Thank you both for reading and responding..I’m glad you enjoyed..

This clock takes away all that was and could be. This is well-made and makes one think of the past. I enjoyed this.

I’m glad you both enjoyed..and thats a great take with the amnesia..time is our most precious commodity and something we def take for granted

It’s so cold it burns. The rhyme scheme is excellent.