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Read MoreWalking down the corridorTo the sound of laughing echosCursing at the foreignersFrom the nearby local ghettos Citizens that he justified And "dangerous" immigrants Now that he sees them insideNothing is making senseThey are nothing like him As he passes them in the hall Blue...
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Thank you very much for the kind response..hope all is well
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Read MoreHow much more can I possibly takeMistakes misery and heartache Ignorant people, I'm constantly stunnedMental illnesses, loss of loved onesBurning up and boiling insideMy emotions no longer will they hideAnger expressed on my faceMy blackened heart I can't replace...
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This is a strong piece my favorite part is
“Anger expressed on my face
My blackened heart I can’t replace
The rage I have, I’m full of hate
My pins been pulled ready to detonate
No filter on the words I say”-
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Good morning Fia..hope all is well..thank you
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Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks again for reading and commenting
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Your writing here sinks deeper than I even knew possible. I have no worthy words of comfort. Only, hang in there, my friend, if you can. And if writing it out helps, keep them coming! We are here for you. A soulful write all of us can relate to in some way or another.
Clay
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Thank you also..just need to release some emotions..writing helps me release dark thoughts..I appreciate you taking time to comment
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Read MoreTears rain down from the heavensGuided missiles used as weaponsDesperately trying to warn usLosing our faith and lacking trustThe storm is raging as we self destructThe fire from his tears begins to eruptOur greed and lust for consumption Warnings...
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We as humans should care about the environment and each other but it seems that caring about the environment and each other is not our priority. It’s a shame.
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I agree..we should..but we do not value whats important..only what we consume..and the values we grew up with seem long gone
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Great polemic no doubt regarding the recent US attack on Venezuela.
I can’t accept that the bulk of American citizens would still vote for Trump and his Court Jesters.
To be fair, Trump is only the puppet.The puppet masters are the unelected, neo fascist multinational corporations running all western democracies.-
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While I agree the unelected neo facists are the corporations running the western democracy and they feed the war machine because it generates a ton of money for themselves and their ppl..I do worry there are still many Americans that will support trump and his jesters no matter what..no matter what actions or evidence is presented to them their opinions dont change..I don’t know what the tipping scale is for Trump supporters but I dont think we are there..unfortunately..its scary knowing more chaos lies ahead
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Politics aside, this is a well written poem with great flow and a spot on message. I can sense your urgency within it. But you didn’t lose control. Well done.
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Thank you for your respond..I appreciate you reading and commenting..glad you enjoyed
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Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you..I appreciate you as well
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Fantastic, intelligent write here. Nicely worded and refreshingly accurate.